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Never Gives Up Her Dead, by Mathbrush
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Cage Break, by Jac Colvin
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After the Accident, by Amanda Walker

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Worth It, April 4, 2023
by OverThinking
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(Full disclosure, I beta tested this)

This game is challenging. Not because it’s hard—in fact, what in other games might constitute puzzles are simple and well-clued enough that they really cease to be puzzles at all (but then, puzzles are far from the point of this experience)—but because of the core emotional truths it communicates.

The first half of this comes from the PC’s state after the accident itself, which is full of impressionistic fragments tumbling over each other unpunctuated, everything coming too fast and too bright in waves of sensory detail and memory that, at least at first, add up more to overwhelm than actionable information (this is praise). The second half is the meat of the story, as we see some of the scenes that led up to this moment, minutes or days or weeks before.

I won’t spoil what’s going on past that, other than to say that I found the main NPC detestable to the point where I sometimes had trouble sympathizing with the protagonist’s plight—I couldn’t really see much reason for them to have stayed for so long, having only the information presented in the game. This is at least partially due to my own experiences with people like that NPC (I would use his name, but we never learn it—which I think is a good choice), and my knee-jerk unwillingness to engage with them. However, I did love how tightly bound together their story was, with Chekhov’s guns being established backwards in time as the world of the present slowly expanded around us.

Overall, I think this game is worth your time, so long as you feel you can safely engage with the tough emotions and experiences at its core.

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free bird., by Passerine

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Clever bird. Animal praxis., March 2, 2023
by OverThinking
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Full disclosure: this game did use my seed “Room; Closed Door,” which challenged authors to create a room escape game using only nouns and adjectives—no verbs. free bird. combines it with another room escape seed: “Feathered Fury” by Amanda Walker, which instructed authors to write a game where you play as a bird of paradise trying to escape from the hideout of a group of poachers. This combo didn’t even enter my mind as I perused the seeds, but this game combines the two with impressive synergy. Each passage is a series of adjective-noun pairs, mostly disconnected from each other to communicate our feathered protagonist’s individual isolated impressions. This immediately puts us in the bird’s headspace both in terms of cognition and confusion, as it’s hard to extrapolate much past the limited information we get.

Still, the protagonist manages to display a good bit of personality. When we look in a mirror early in the game, it describes itself as “handsome macaw.” It has both a good deal of empathy and of pragmatism, able to recognize other animals’ plights and wanting to help even in the narration outside of the player’s choices. It can also pick one thing up at a time in its beak to use as a tool, which makes for some interesting puzzles. I will admit there was one point towards the end where I felt a little stuck, but exploring further revealed sufficient cluing that I’d missed.

The author has described free bird. as “hopepunk,” and I think that’s a perfect descriptor for a story that grows to depict a communal effort to seek freedom, make positive change, and enact radical kindness. I think we could all use a bit of that—even those of us who can’t fly.

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The Usher Foundation XII: The Flesh, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation XI: The Lonely, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation X: The Stranger, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation IX: The Corruption, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation VIII: The Spiral, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation VII: The Slaughter, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation VI: The Desolation, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation V: The Eye, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation IV: The Vast, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation III: The Buried, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation II: The Hunt, by Apollosboy
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The Usher Foundation I: The Dark, by Apollosboy
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The iCarly RPG, by StamblerRambler
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(do not) forget, by lectronice
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The Lady's Book of Decency, by Sean
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Tangaroa Deep, by Astrid Dalmady
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Erstwhile, by Aster (formally Maddie) Fialla, Marijke Perry
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A Single Ouroboros Scale, by Naomi Norbez
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The Enigma of the Old Manor House, by Daniel M. Stelzer
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God is in the Radio, by catsket
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Zero Chance of Recovery, by Andrew Schultz
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You Feel Like You've Read this in a Book, by Austin Lim
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Witchfinders, by Tania Dreams
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Who Shot Gum E. Bear?, by Damon L. Wakes
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A Walk Around the Neighborhood, by Leo Weinreb
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Use Your Psychic Powers at Applebee's, by Geoffrey Golden
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Under the Bridge, by Samantha Khan
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U.S. Route 160, by Sangita V Nuli
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Trouble in Sector 471, by Arthur DiBianca
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Tower of Plargh, by caranmegil
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To Persist/Exist/Endure, Press 1, by Anthony O
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The Tin Mug, by Alice E. Wells, Sia See and Jkj Yuio
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Through the Forest with the Beast, by Star
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The Thirty Nine Steps, by Graham Walmsley
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The Thick Table Tavern, by manonamora
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Thanatophobia, by Robert Goodwin
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The Staycation, by Maggie H
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Star Tripper, by Sam Ursu
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Prism, by Eliot M.B. Howard
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The Princess of Vestria, by K Paulo
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The Pool, by Jacob Reux
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The Only Possible Prom Dress, by Jim Aikin
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One Way Ticket, by Vitalii Blinov
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One Final Pitbull Song (at the End of the World), by Paige Morgan
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Nose Bleed, by Stanley W. Baxton
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No One Else Is Doing This, by Lauren O'Donoghue
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A Matter of Heist Urgency, by FLACRabbit
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Lucid, by Caliban's Revenge
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Low-Key Learny Jokey Journey, by Andrew Schultz
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The Lottery Ticket, by Anonymous
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Lost Coastlines, by William Dooling
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Lost at the market, by Nynym
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A Long Way to the Nearest Star, by SV Linwood
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Let Them Eat Cake, by Alicia Morote
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Lazy Wizard's Guide, by Lenard Gunda
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The Last Christmas Present, by JG Heithcock
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January, by litrouke
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Into The Sun, by Dark Star
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Inside, by Ira Vlasenko
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INK, by Sangita V Nuli
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i wish you were dead., by Sofía Abarca
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HOURS, by aidanvoidout
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The Hidden King's Tomb, by Joshua Fratis
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Headlights, by Jordan White and Eric Zinda
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Hanging by threads, by Carlos Pamies
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The Grown-Up Detective Agency, by Brendan Patrick Hennessy
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Graveyard Strolls, by Adina Brodkin
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Glimmer, by Katie Benson
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Esther's, by Brad Buchanan and Alleson Buchanan
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Elvish for Goodbye, by David Gürçay-Morris
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Death by Lightning, by Chase Capener
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Crash, by Phil Riley
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The Counsel in The Cave, by Josh
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A Chinese Room, by Milo van Mesdag
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CHASE THE SUN, by Frankie Kavakich
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[IFComp 22 - Beta] Cannelé & Nomnom - Defective Agency, by Younès R. & Yazaleea
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Campus Invaders, by Marco Vallarino
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Blood Island, by Billy Krolick
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The Archivist and the Revolution, by Autumn Chen
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Arborea, by richard develyn
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Approaching Horde!, by CRAIG RUDDELL
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Am I My Brother's Keeper?, by Nadine Rodriguez
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An Alien's Mistaken Impressions of Humanity's Pockets, by Andrew Howe
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Admiration Point, by Rachel Helps
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According to Cain, by Jim Nelson
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The Absence of Miriam Lane, by Abigail Corfman
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4 Edith + 2 Niki, by fishandbeer
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Buggy, by Mathbrush
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You're In Deep, by Xuelder
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The Good Ghost, by Sarah Willson, Kirk Damato
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Sweetpea, by Sophia de Augustine
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Everybody Dies, by Jim Munroe
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Lost Pig, by Admiral Jota
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Color the Truth, by mathbrush
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Horse Master, by Tom McHenry
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Of Their Shadows Deep, by Amanda Walker
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All Alone, by Ian Finley
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Junior Arithmancer, by Mike Spivey
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Vespers, by Jason Devlin
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10pm, by litrouke
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This Game is a Dog, by Amy Clare Fontaine
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Dr Horror's House of Terror, by Ade McT
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Halfway, To The Lamppost, by Kaitlin Tremblay
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The Tiniest Room, by Erik108
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Violet, by Jeremy Freese
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Toby's Nose, by Chandler Groover
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Galatea, by Emily Short
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The Spirit Within Us, by Alessandro Ielo
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Beneath Fenwick, by Pete Gardner
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The Library, by Leonardo Boselli
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Mermaids of Ganymede, by Seth Paxton
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Fine Felines, by Felicity Banks
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And Then You Come to a House Not Unlike the Previous One, by B.J. Best
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4x4 Archipelago, by Agnieszka Trzaska
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What Heart Heard Of, Ghost Guessed, by Amanda Walker
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The Miller's Garden, by Damon L. Wakes
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Brave Bear, by John Evans
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The Last Doctor, by Quirky Bones
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A Papal Summons, or The Church Cat, by Bitter Karella
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The Waiting Room, by Billy Krolick
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You are SpamZapper 3.1, by Leon Arnott
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BLK MTN, by Laura Paul
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This Won't Make You Happy, by Mike Gillis
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Taste of Fingers, by V Dobranov
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Closure, by Sarah Willson
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The Dead Account, by Naomi Norbez
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Smart Theory, by AKheon
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After-Words, by fireisnormal
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My Gender Is a Fish, by Carter Gwertzman
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Weird Grief, by Naomi Norbez
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Enveloping Darkness, by John Muhlhauser, Helen Pluta, and Othniel Aryee
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The Daughter, by GioBorrows
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This Is A Real Thing That Happened, by Carolyn VanEseltine
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Queers in Love at the End of the World, by Anna Anthropy
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Emily is Away, by Kyle Seeley
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Counterfeit Monkey, by Emily Short
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Save the Date, by Chris Cornell
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With Those We Love Alive, by Porpentine and Brenda Neotenomie
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You are Standing at a Crossroads, by Astrid Dalmady
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Soft Earth, by Jon Sorce
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