1-9 of 9
|1 star:||(3)||Average Rating: |
Number of Ratings: 9
Write a review
- Mr. Patient (Saint Paul, Minn.), November 20, 2022
1 people found the following review helpful:
Things that go bump in the forest, November 20, 2022
Through the Forest with the Beast is a fifteen minute branching Twine game by someone who, as far as I can tell, is a first-time IFComp entrant. The premise is simple - youíre a person who has been revealed as a dangerous Beast and cast out by their village, and must navigate the dangerous forest between you and a safe haven. Thereís several different paths through the game in classic CYOA style, and you have to manage various stats (health/stamina/hunger/thirst) during your journey.
What I Liked
TTFWTB immediately makes a good impression - it has a gorgeous background (possibly drawn by the author?) and ambient forest sounds that really set the mood. (Bonus points for the text being easy to read!) The choices come thick and fast and have immediate consequences - each can take you a number of surprising places, and thereís no cheap instadeaths. Where this game really shines, though, is the experience it gives you of slowly discovering the forest, its inhabitants, and the truth about what makes you a Beast. Iím a huge sucker for sci-fi/fantasy blending and this game does it well.
What I Didnít
The writing in TTFWTB could use some work. There were several grammar issues, and overall the writing felt too rushed - like it was trying to cram too much detail into too little space. There were a lot of good descriptions, but they come at you rapid-fire with no room to breathe. Some playtesting and/or editing would have been good here. On the gameplay side, stat management ended up being frustratingly out of my control. Itís hard to tell which of your choices will restore which (if any) stats, and at least once I died of dehydration due to no fault on my part.
- OverThinking, November 16, 2022
- Rovarsson (Belgium), November 16, 2022
- Karl Ove Hufthammer (Bergen, Norway), November 15, 2022
- reyryan, October 21, 2022
3 people found the following review helpful:
a short fugitive monster escape, October 21, 2022
You are a fugitive, running through the woods in search of safety.
A highly branching but short story - I reached an ending in about 15 minutes.
I came up against a number of technical issues: I found the text hard to see against the background, and there were a couple of typos.
An inconsistent tone undermined the gameís mood. This was both in the dialogue and environment descriptions - contrasting with both the internal monologues and the theme. Also, I always expect any customisation options to play an important role in shaping the character, however these had minimal effect on the story.
While the core themes were promising, they felt underdeveloped. Themes of identity and the ďus vs themĒ of humanity vs monsterhood all have great potential - with more focus on the narrator's developing self and how it interacts with other characters, it could definitely form a more focused story.
2 people found the following review helpful:
A very brief RPG-style game about being marked and fleeing, October 13, 2022
In this Twine game, you play as someone born as a Beast, someone who is marked with a strange symbol. You have to run away to a place where everyone else is like you or respects you.
The game seems like it will be huge, with two input fields and 4 status bars or conditions. But I played to two different endings in less than 10 minutes, both of which seem like full stories.
There are a lot of great ideas here; the overall storyline, the lush background graphics and sounds, the compelling choices and the way even the writing responded to my actions. But it all feels very unfinished and unpolished, with some typos and grammatical errors (like 'corspes' for 'corpses'). This just needed more time, I think.
- jaclynhyde, October 7, 2022
1-9 of 9 | Return to game's main page