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The Unseemly Virus, by cpollett
0 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
Two for One Deal., June 7, 2023
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Two short puzzles taking on different definitions of virus (computer/biological), where you play as an investigator (hacker?). The puzzles felt quite reminiscing of the ones you'd find in an escape room. A neat idea in 500 words or less.

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The Real Me (Neo-Twiny Jam 2023), by Ashes_and_Sand
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A touching submission., June 7, 2023
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Through a fantasy setting, a fairy describes his experience of finding and accepting their identity in the face of adversity. It is quite emotional and raw.

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A Crown of Ash (Neo-Twiny Jam 2023), by Ashes_and_Sand
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Anxiousness and marriage ceremony, name a more iconic duo., June 7, 2023
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As a short prototype, this piece manages to tell just enough to hook the reader, and very little that it leaves you wanting more. From is ominous title to the tense descriptions, the writing manages to leave you with too many questions, and wanting to find those answers. It would be interesting to see where the author takes the story…
Also Armstead is a great name for a knight!

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Witch Blood, by Ramona G.
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An accident, a resurrection… but at what cost?, June 7, 2023
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This very creepy and dark short piece has a killer hook and has as killer of an ending. The colour combinations for the theme and the unsettling music really adds to the macabre setting of the story.
While it is already satisfying as a short read, a longer version would be very intriguing indeed…

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idle hands, by Sophia de Augustine
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Idle no longer…, June 7, 2023
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A very graphic and erotic description of two bodies coming together. The writing, as always, is excellent.
The use of a mouse over macro (to reveal hidden words) is akin to the hands discovering new skin and crease of a body, making the interactivity even more topical.
Really enjoyed this short piece.

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