A Crown of Ash (Neo-Twiny Jam 2023)

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Anxiousness and marriage ceremony, name a more iconic duo., June 7, 2023
by manonamora
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As a short prototype, this piece manages to tell just enough to hook the reader, and very little that it leaves you wanting more. From is ominous title to the tense descriptions, the writing manages to leave you with too many questions, and wanting to find those answers. It would be interesting to see where the author takes the story…
Also Armstead is a great name for a knight!

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