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Roboto, by Maliface
Mini sci-fi horro, June 11, 2024
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Roboto is a sci-fi horror kinetic piece, where you follow a robotic scientist waking up in their dark lab, looking for their phone. Forced to rely only on touch, you explore the lab, in search for the item, second guessing every sound and everything. The minimalist prose gives off an uneasy atmosphere, with the descriptions of the inanimate robots challenging their lifeless state. It is subtle, but enough to make you feel that shiver running down your spine.

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I Have Something Important to Tell You, by KnightAnNi
A discussion about depression, June 11, 2024
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I Have Something Important to Tell You is a short kinetic entry about depression and communicating personal experiences with this illness with their young child. While I question the phrasing of some sentences to be age-appropriate (to the hypothetical five-year old), it still can be an important discussion to have, especially with de-stigmatising the use of pills to combat the illness.

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Kel Versus the Kitchen, by Tabitha / alyshkalia
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
Stir the pot, but don't make waves..., June 11, 2024
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Kel Versus the Kitchen is a short meter-sensitive Twine, where you play as teenage Kel, walking in on a frenzy family affair, of getting ready for dinner. Before you can even take off your shoes, you are commandeered to do this and that, and blamed for things essentially out of your control. The entry does a pretty good job at depicting that stressful moment before guests arrive and nothing is truly ready. Very chaotic!! Depending on the choices made, which may decrease your/everyone’s patience, you will get one of the four endings, from frustrating to cathartic. But it’s pretty fun to try to find them all!

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The eight-headed giant, by zeno pillan
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
Roll dem dices and face your boss!, June 11, 2024
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The eight-headed giant is a micro parser where you are some sort of fantasy office drone about to go face your eight-headed giant boss, and do an important presentation. But before you get into it sword swinging, you need to go around the office and get ready (i.e. collect all that you need). It’s pretty railroady and simple to solve, but I still manage to get stuck because I forgot to do the most important thing: FACE the giant xD
Also a neat thing: it has cool ASCII art!

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Oh No: My Hot Coworkers Keep Turning Me On!, by vermis
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Oh No: It's just a tease..., June 11, 2024*
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Oh No: My Hot Coworkers Keep Turning Me On! is a tease of a tiny entry, where you play as a horny space farer trying to cross their ship. But their path is crossed by their many hot coworkers, doing this and that, in very enticing positions (or so you, a pervert sees as). You can either be a peeper and gawk at your coworkers (learn about who they are, how they look, what they are doing), or pass by and keep to yourself. But peep too much and you’d burst!

For the little words available, it’s very tame. But I’d definitely play a longer version of this game!

* This review was last edited on June 12, 2024
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you are an ancient chinese poet in exile, by KA Tan
and you fill your days with melancholy, June 10, 2024
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you are an ancient chinese poet in exile is a short poetic day in the life of an Ancient Chinese poet in exile. Almost kinetic, with subtle variation between your choice of activities, you wake up in a beautiful scenic location, alone and maybe a bit lonely too, filling your day with distractions and reminiscing over your fate, sealing the day with a few poetic lines. It is delightful, both in the calmness of the setting, the bitterness of past events, and the melancholy of it all. Lovely!

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To Let Go, by Max Fog
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To Let Go, June 10, 2024
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To Let Go is a short interactive exploration piece between the ever changing state of nature and bustling speed of change in cities. Though, it seems somewhat a rejection of modernity, looking down on the city “winning” the fight against the woods, technological advancement ruining the natural state of the world. Maybe a bit naive in its nihilistic view. Disregarding the beauty and good.

I don’t know what to make of the interactivity. Coupled with timed text, you go back and forth between passages as some paths are locked until you see a specific text. I wasn’t always sure whether I needed to wait longer to see if a new link would pop up or if I had to try another path first. I did like the different text animation between the “city” and the “forest” sections.

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A Mind to Call Home, by Chris Pollett
Parasite adventure, June 10, 2024
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A Mind to Call Home is a tiny adventure where you play as a Space parasite worm, jumping from one host to the next (or not) in hopes to live a long life an die of old age. There seem to be three major deeds to achieve between four hosts. So you need to balance your health and the host’s to get to them. I don’t think it’s possible to do more than one at a time? Some seemed easier than others (I reached one of them on my first run).

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Liminal, by roman_hyacinths
Twisted fated meeting, June 10, 2024
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Liminal is a micro visual novel about two exes meeting each other on the street by accident, and strike up an awkward conversation… or are they?
This short-VN, with gorgeous (hand-painted!!!) visual and impeccable voice-acting does a great job at portraying that first meeting post-breakup, when things have sort of settled, but still hurt. The familiarity between two people, but forced somewhat to be distance, even with lingering feelings. The attention to certain details might seem strange, until the end. Then everything get into places, and it feels much sadder than it started.
A gorgeous piece!

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would you remember, by blood-teeth
what if you could see what happens after, June 10, 2024
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would you remember is a kinetic Twine one-sided conversation between a recently passed woman and her still-living wife. It is a piece about grief and love, and those we leave behind. It is strange how it gives a raw depiction of grief from an outsider onlooker (the woman is “present” but only in a spectral? sense), yet still be so personal in the choice of details depicted. An emotional out-of-body monologue.

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