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Structural Integrity

by Tabitha O'Connell

2023

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(based on 5 ratings)
3 reviews

About the Story

You are Yaan, a well-off government official romantically involved with former messenger boy Kel. Uncover the cracks in your relationship, and decide what you're going to do about them...

Author's Comment: ďThis game is based on my novella of the same name. I had a lot of fun adapting it and exploring different possible ways the story could go, as well as making room for the readerís perception to shape the story.Ē


Game Details

Language: English (en)
First Publication Date: April 5, 2023
Current Version: Unknown
Development System: Twine
IFID: Unknown
TUID: sz9u6q8sj6yhb6x7

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Entrant, Main Festival - Spring Thing 2023

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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
Will the building fall apart, or your relationship?, May 17, 2023
by Wynter (London, UK)
Related reviews: Choice-based fiction

This falls into the genre of slice-of-life relationship-based stories, centring on a disagreement between a couple and how it ties into the hidden faultlines of their relationship: the title is elegantly apt. The story is told from different viewpoints, often flitting back and forth, which I wasnít initially expecting, but itís done very well. I wasnít sure what the setting is supposed to be - one of the characters is supposed to have worked as a messenger, delivering messages across the city, but thatís the only real indicator: the story centres on a situation that could happen in all sorts of worlds.

A very nice-looking Twine, and rather like a short story in its ability to communicate a lot in what only takes a brief time to play. I very much liked the use of differently-coloured links for different purposes - blue to add extra description, red to move the story onwards. At the end, you reach a page listing all the endings you have reached so far, so it has some good replay value.


1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
Narratively innovative LGBTQ Twine based piece, May 16, 2023
by Vivienne Dunstan (Dundee, Scotland)

This is a LGBTQ novella adapted into multiple ending Twine form.

Thereís quite a lot of interaction with your partner, and a lot of choices about how to speak to them. But often early on I felt it wasnít offering me the chance to explore difficult choices. There were things I wanted to say or do that werenít offered to me. Which is maybe not surprising if itís adapted from a novella.

However it does something narrative wise part way through that totally switches around, and I found extremely satisfying. I only played through to one ending. There are multiple choices you could make and change how it ends up. But i felt interactive, and exploring the characters, and reaching a satisfactory resolution.

So yes, initially I thought this was going to be far too linear and not interactive enough. But then things flipped, and it took a totally fresh approach. Well done to the author!


1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A queer relationship in trouble, May 1, 2023
by MathBrush
Related reviews: 15-30 minutes

This game definitely brought back a lot of memories. I had a long relationship where I had a lot of work-life balance issues, and it eventually ended up falling apart, and this reminded me of that.

There are several endings, so there are likely different versions of this game depending on how you play, but in my playthrough, there were two main characters: a wealthy government official, and a young, poorer-class individual.

They love each other, but there are tensions. The poor one is concerned with fairness and trying to find beauty in day to day moments, while the richer one is trying to 'bring home the bacon' and do well at work.

An argument about one partner staying home late and missing an appointment because their boss corralled them at work reminded me of times that my boss in my first job wanted me to stay home late while my partner was caring for our newborn.

It's a tough situation. So I think there's a lot of emotion in this game. Your choices have a lot of freedom, too.

The only thing missing for me is length; I felt like the pacing in the first half was more drawn out and set up expectations for a longer game but that was rapidly concluded in the ending, leaving me wanting or expecting more.


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