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A few steps (up the hill), by Ether
Let's take a walk!, July 10, 2025
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A few steps (up the hill) is an atmospheric tiny piece about taking a walk in nature, going up a hill, checking out some ruins and taking a break under the shade of a tree. A little adventure in nature, looking to discover new things. There is something quite soothing about the writing, and vivid with the details in the descriptions. Quite lovely!

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The Star's Call, by KingDunnad
Tiny Space Horror, July 10, 2025
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The Star's Call is a tiny sci-fi horror game set on a spaceship in space. Waking up as you usually, you notice something is not quite right this morning. Your companions do not really look like themselves - or maybe you don't feel like yourself. And when the star calls, everything change.

I think I left the game more confused than scared. I could see where it was going, but something didn't quite click with me. Though, I really liked the effect on the images for each NPC. Very trippy.

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The Binding Below, by Novalore
Sealed Fate, July 10, 2025
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The Binding Below is a tiny fantasy piece where knight betrays his king, when realising what he'd previously undertaken - unspeakable horrors unnamed. During the darkest hour, a change of heart to right some wrongs, leading to a tragic end. Saved by the king, made to be its bloody hand, only to stay by his side forever. A sacrifice to save all.

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A Cup of Coffee (Neo -Twiny 2025), by Bottlecap Rabbit Games
Coffee order, July 10, 2025
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A Cup of Coffee is a micro interactive piece about making coffee. The game prompts you to pick a base, creamer, and toppings to add to your cup, before your drink is ready. I'm not a coffee drinker*, but I'm a sucker for all those cooking/mixing games, so it was nice to see that mechanic in the jam.
*I pretended the base was cocoa instead :P

This might be the tiniest entry we've ever had?

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黃鶴楼 (Yellow Crane Tower), by PublicDomainFriend
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Poetic Translations, July 10, 2025
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Yellow Crane Tower is a micro translation game, where you ponder on the meaning of the eponymous poem about the eponymous landmark you read on a plaque while visiting Wuhan with your family. Inspired by the mechanic of piele (from the first NTJ) and its longer companion Verses, Yellow Crane Tower allows you to click/hover on the Mandarin characters to reveal its English equivalent(s) - showcasing not one, but two variations of the final verse of the poem.

Translation is a fascinating exercise, as no two languages is the same, and seeing the act unfold before your eyes - with previously translated words changing as new characters are translated - is kinda magical. It's very much a layered process, with never, really, a definite end.

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You & "You", by Codename-001
Violence is always the answer, except when it's not, July 10, 2025
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You & "You" is a micro flash fiction about waging war against yourself. Forced again and again to fight a copy of yourself (a shadow version?), the circle is bound to repeat endlessly, with either its death or yours marking the end of the battle. The war, however, requires a different tactic. Violence does not always solve the problem.
The "true" path is pretty easy to find (especially if you're risk adverse like me).

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The Secret of Colors, by neseliol
Tiny riddles, July 10, 2025
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The Secret of Colors is a tiny interactive riddle made in Twine. After a rain shower, you find a mysterious notebook, with glowing circles representing the rainbow. You must answer each question within the book to solve the riddle and move forward.

The questions are fairly easy, as you are given two options each time, and the game doesn't let you fail either, as it will reload the question until you pick the correct answer (went and double-checked, because I got it correct on my first try :P ). Though, I wonder if it would have been more effective if the player was prompted to enter the response rather than choose from a list.

Still, it was a cute little entry!

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The Nascent Cave, by Max!
Intriguing start, July 10, 2025
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The Nascent Cave is a prologue for an unwritten fantasy journey. After an earthquake shakes your village, you find yourself lured to the new crack tearing the field, with a cave going deep into the depth of Earth. Against your better judgement, you climb down... and return changed, and not alone.

It's a pretty intriguing introduction, that brings a lot of questions: was this earthquake a natural event or did something transpired? why did you find what you did in the cave? how will this affect you in the long term (I assume, not well...)? will you be able to reverse it? etc... Definitely got hooked!

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canonical, by ChaseJxyz
never mess with timelines, July 10, 2025
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canonical is a tiny kinetic sci-fi piece following the discovery of a transubstantiation in the timeline, which changed the course of a person's life. This isn't surprising for the narrator, having changed reality in the past themselves (implied for the worst) and now working to catch others doing the same. Though there's no resolution to the why or the how (or any question really), the piece does set up the mystery and setting, and potentially conflicts.
Though, part of my kinda wished it would have ended at this sentence: everyone else fabricates evidence, what’s a little reality on top?

This reminded me a bit of the Temps Commission in The Umbrella Academy and in a way Looper.

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Coins of Gold, by solipsistgames
You get a maze, and you get a maze and..., July 5, 2025
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Coins of Gold is a tiny puzzle made in Whimsy (a bitsy clone), in which you find yourself in a dark tomb with no exit, but an empty altar in the middle. Oh, and there's a gold coin. What will happen if you bring the coin to the alter...

Well, you're in a dark tomb. One measly altar puzzle isn't enough. So, you also get a maze. And you know what? Let's throw you another one that will make you pull your hair out for good measure (hint: a screenshot will save your sanity).

An interesting proof of concept.

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