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Stuff and Nonsense, by Felicity Banks
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
A quick Twine game about magical metals and Queen Victoria , May 2, 2017*

This author has written several very good games in the past, but I feel that this one doesn't live up to their reputation.

You pick to be one of several magic using Australians in the 1800s during a heist. The game is very similar in style to choicescript, and overall feels like an opening chapter from a choicescript game.

I think overall, this game and another game from this comp (the Eight Characters game) spent a great deal of time on front loaded back story, which involves a lot of reading that does not translate into gameplay. This isn't bad in itself, but the rest of both of these games focus on quick-action gameplay, so it conflicts with the earlier play style.

* This review was last edited on May 10, 2017
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Thaxted Havershill And the Golden Wombat, by Andrew Brown
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A short-to-mid length goofy twine game about adventure, May 1, 2017*

This is an entry in the 'I'm so wacky!' class of games. The text is a garish yellow, and the plot is disjointed and wild. It lasts for a respectable number of turns, and has some basic puzzles.

The author is completely committed to their writing, though, and they did a good job conveying the emotion that they wanted. This game is not really a bad little 'snack' if you're just looking for something quick and mildly amusing during a lunch break.

* This review was last edited on May 10, 2017
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Quest for the Traitor Saint, by Owlor
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A my-little-pony inspired game about a dangerous island and a hidden saint, May 1, 2017*

I helped to beta-test this my little pony inspired game.

This game is accompanied by many hand-drawn illustrations of various bizarre creatures and locations. You walk around an island, exploring with your pony companion, and try to discover a patron saint of diplomacy to help your quest.

The illustrations add a lot to the game, and the writing is inventive and descriptive.

The game was fun, but didn't draw me in with an emotional connection. It is fairly long, but ends seemingly mid-story.

* This review was last edited on May 10, 2017
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Cinnamon Tea, by Daffs O'Dill
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A short, minimally branching twine game about dreams and violent events, May 1, 2017*

In this game, you choose one of three options, then click through a few links in a row.

The game uses the standard twine style without customization, although each of the branches ends in a picture.

The stories are about bizarre and violent dreams. One of the branches had an explicit sexual encounter, at which point I stopped playing.

* This review was last edited on May 10, 2017
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Slicker City, by Andrew Schultz
1 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
A shortish game based on items with a certain kind of wordplay, May 1, 2017*

This game is a sequel to The Problems Compound. It is not one of my favorite Andrew Schultz games. Schultz has made some brilliant games, like Threediopolis and Shuffling Around, that are based on wordplay and puzzles, where the player has to use wordplay tricks to come up with commands.

This game and its predecessor have some small elements like that, but are mostly big set-pieces there to show off silly word reversals. These word reversals, while clever, are difficult to understand at times, and lead to a disjointed game world. This game was polished, but shorter than Problems Compound.

* This review was last edited on May 10, 2017
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The Shoe Dept., by Aquanet
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A legnthy twine game with inventory and puzzles about evil and shoes, May 1, 2017*

This is a pretty long twine game with some dark humor, all about a conspiracy and a new shoe.

This game is well-coded, and includes difficult twine constructs and handles it well. The text seems mostly error-free.

The game handles puzzles much better than most Twine games. The annoyance of lawnmowering links was offset by the creativity of the puzzle design.

The writing wasn't especially polished, and the story was hard to follow in places. It has a single and unnecessary strong profanity near the start.

* This review was last edited on May 10, 2017
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Not Another Hero, by Cecilia Rosewood
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A mid-length choicescript game about controlling superheroes, May 1, 2017*

This is a fairly long ifcomp choicescript game (about 5 chapters, though more are planned) about a world where superheroes have to be contained, like X-Men or the Incredibles.

This game seems to hit up all of the classic stereotypes of its genre, so I found it easy to just skim the text, the details all blurring together. The writing didn't pop out, and the text seemed to just do the job without excitement.

I was pleased by the interactivity, however; I tried to play as a rude brute, to see if the game could handle different styles of play, and the game really seemed to handle my input well. I would play it again; I feel like it has good bones, but it could use a few rewrites to get it to pop.

* This review was last edited on May 10, 2017
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Four Seconds, by Jason Reigstad
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A compelling science fiction mystery with spotty implementation, September 29, 2016

This game is sort of like Babel without beta testing. You play a psychic detective walking through a destroyed lab, and you have to relive a man's memories to determine what happened.

The memories are really interesting, and the general story is very good. However, as others have noted, you eventually reach a place where the implementation is completely spotty and the walkthrough is your only help.

Recommended, with a walkthrough, for fans of intense science fiction.

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The Island of Doctor Wooby, by Ryan Veeder
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
A small, cute game with dinosaurs. A bit frustrating, September 28, 2016

This game was entered in Pet Jam. You are on an island where most things are made of felt, including a wide variety of randomly generated dinosaurs.

There's not a lot to do; most of the items consists of 'flavor' items that allow you to have fun, rather than pursuing an overarching goal.

I was on mobile, and it was frustrating dealing with the long dinosaur names (which can be rewritten) and with the red herrings.

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Map of Fahlstaff, by Ian Hinck
1 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
A well done location-based Twine game with few events and no end, September 28, 2016

This game is a luscious set-piece with nice graphics and infrequently changing links.

You wander around a city called Fahlstaff, absorbing local culture. Occasionally bizarre events will hapoen.

You make a choice at the beginning that determines the bizarre events. My choice led to some truly clever ideas.

The game seemed to have no ending.

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