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piele

by Kit Riemer profile

2023

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(based on 3 ratings)
3 reviews

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a very short word clicking game in english and romanian


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Entrant - Neo-Twiny Jam

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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
It's not in English, at first!, July 6, 2023
by Andrew Schultz (Chicago)
Related reviews: Neo Twiny Jam

Piele is a work that probably isn't intended to make sense the first time through, but it was rewarding to make sense out of and figure what was going on. Even if I didn't already trust a work by Kit Reimer to Go Somewhere Interesting, it was pretty clear the confusion was 1) intentional and 2) added to the experience.

To overgeneralize, there's a small page text in a language you probably won't guess. I had fun doing so. It's not from a huge country, but not an obscure one either. The point is that you go through the process of deciphering stuff, not just translating, but understanding what the words mean. The writing is poetic in nature, with two poems of four lines each, and sometimes, when you click on it, the literal interpretations appear first before the translated ones do. So the meaning slowly pops up.

This feels like a work you should experience for yourself, as explanations or critiques on my part would either fall short or be just plain wrong. So I’m just going to mention that clicking on the ending twice kicks you to the end of the work, so avoid that if you want to see it all right away!

Hint for the language: (Spoiler - click to show)look at the accents. They are unique (AFAIK) to a reasonably-sized country. If you're stumped, (Spoiler - click to show)cut and paste and use Google Translate. I think it’s a good choice for what the author was (I think) trying to accomplish. And I think it was successful, and that’s why I’m only semi-revealing the spoilers.

One other thing that makes more sense after the first time through: (Spoiler - click to show)the cover art.

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2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
Keeping out of the…, June 23, 2023
by manonamora
Related reviews: neotwinyjam

A cyclical poem of trying to read/understand a note written in Romanian(?) - using links to reveal its translation. There is a strange air to this entry, a lot of unsaid and hints…
You are supposedly content with the work…
…and I was left confused…
Very much Kit's brand of trippy!

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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A surreal experience with romanian, July 18, 2023
by MathBrush
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This game was written in 500 words or less for the Neo Twiny Jam.

In a refreshing twist from the primarily (though not entirely) English games of the jam, this game is bilingual, with some Romanian first translated literally and then idiomatically (I assume that's what's going on; if not, it has the feel of that).

The first page had me captivated for a bit, puzzling over the different meanings and words and trying to understand the final message.

Then it was all soon over; another page, and then an ending. I definitely wanted more of it, but it seemed creepy, mysterious, and effective.

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