Captain Cutter's Treasure

This is a pretty solidly-implemented short scenario using Inform 6 with the PunyInform library. It has 4500 lines of well-organized source code, which is available for download, and which demonstrates some advanced techniques such as use of a third noun. The PunyInform library has evolved significantly since the version used here (which is 2.4), however, so be advised that some changes may be necessary if adapting the code for your own use.

The review by MathBrush highlights the finicky nature of some parts of the interaction, which significantly detracts from the player experience. In addition to the strict requirements for phrasing, there are certain places in which the game provides feedback that teaches the player the wrong thing. Later in the game, this can be a problem where, as Mark Twain might put it, what interferes with your progress is not what you don't know but what you know that "just ain't so."

A couple of examples of this spring to mind. First, in the opening room: (Spoiler - click to show)There is a mouse hole. The protagonist, though expected to risk the anger of bloodthirsty pirates in the course of reaching the best ending, is too afraid to >SEARCH or >REACH INTO this hole. The >EXAMINE text for the hole implies that it's too dark to see into, but if a lit lamp is available, then a fresh >EXAMINE will discover something inside the hole. However, the >SEARCH and >REACH INTO commands don't change their behavior in response to light, and this seems a bit cruel, especially in the case of >SEARCH (which implicitly involves examining). Second, on the pirate ship: (Spoiler - click to show)While it is strongly hinted that the PC must create a diversion, it's up to the player to figure out how to do this. The correct solution, which involves (Spoiler - click to show)>BURN PILE OF STRAW after relocating it, might be fine if it weren't for a similar object (in the first room) which can't be moved. It's a case where the player being attentive to the game's feedback works against the player's understanding of the game world -- personally, I would think that the first room object was the more portable of the two in the absence of more information. More importantly, there is an opportunity to (Spoiler - click to show)>CUT ROPES which would seem more than satisfactory to create a diversion and would make use of an available inventory item, but for which no response is programmed.

I know that author Garry Francis is a champion of the old school style, and I still regard this game favorably in general, but its design ignores decades of genuine advances in puzzle craft and interaction technique. What essentials would have been lost by a "merciful" design (per the Zarfian scale) for the warehouse sequence, or by having the NPCs be a little less obviously keyword automatons? (Spoiler - click to show)(Harold never even gets up off the floor of the bar even while answering the PC's questions at length, and shows less life than Samuel, who believably passes out after drinking too much of the rum the PC gives him.) Why the occasional attention to admirably small details such as non-essential pieces of the pirate ship, and the presence of some descriptions of smells and sounds, but only about a dozen conversation topics per NPC? (Spoiler - click to show)(On review of the source code, the most talkative NPC -- in terms of available responses -- on land turns out to be Jerome, instead of Harold or Isaac, which surprised me because he seems the least important of the three.)

I'm going with 2 stars on this one because I think Captain Cutter's Treasure has potential that it hasn't quite reached. It really wouldn't have taken much to cross the threshold into 3-star (i.e. "good") territory, some of the items mentioned above would go a long way, and even doubling the topic count (about a dozen responses each) for NPCs and doing other things to add a touch of realism would make the protagonist's situation more convincing.

The beginning of this game has you waking up in the broom closet of the pub after a brawl. The first thing you see is some kind of nonsensical ransom note about a treasure you know nothing about.

Up to you to figure out what this means.

Captain Cutter's Treasure is a straightforward pirate-themed game which unashamedly ticks a lot of standard boxes. A hidden treasure, a coded map, a damsel in distress,...

Nothing original, but great fun to run around interrogating drunken sailors and exploring the coastal town.

The NPCs have quite a lot to say besides the requisite clues they have to offer. Spend a few minutes with each one to find out what he or she thinks about the rest of the characters.

There is a definite appeal in the portrayal of the coastal town. It feels a bit like a LEGO model of a pirate adventure. All the necessary locations are there, and it doesn't take much to build a much larger world in your imagination from the few morsels of worldbuilding you are given.

The puzzles are easy when taken alone. The harder (but not really hard) part is to figure out how to get the optimal ending. It's no trouble at all to hunt around until you reached all three endings. Once you know the town and have talked to everyone the first time, it's a matter of minutes to do the preparations before trying a new path toward victory.

And now I'm going to rebuild my son's LEGO pirate ship. Arrr!

This game is part of the PunyInform competition. It's fairly polished, and features an quest to go looking for pirate treasure.

In the tradition of classic adventure games, the puzzles don't really make much sense, but they're fun. One involves a 2d block pushing puzzle (easier than the infamous Royal Puzzle from Zork III, but generally similar), and there are some math and logic puzzles.

The game has two endings, one easy to achieve and another harder. The game eschews walkthroughs and hints, but I decompiled the game to find the 'good' ending, which is significantly harder.

The largest negative in the game is the pedantry. Very frequently the game knows exactly what you want to do but forces you to phrase yourself a different way.

Examples include:

">UNLOCK BOX

I think you wanted to say “unlock wooden box with something”. Please try again."

and

">ROW
I think you wanted to say “row something”. Please try again."

A particularly egregious example (spoilers for the 'good ending'):

(Spoiler - click to show)
> lock chest
I think you wanted to say “lock treasure chest with something”. Please try again

> lock chest with golden key
Sorry, I don’t understand what “golden” means.

> lock chest with gold key
First you’d have to close the treasure chest.

> close chest
You close the treasure chest.


This is the equivalent of eating at a restaurant but the chef occasionally grabs your hands to make you move your knife to the other side or to drop your salad fork and take your regular one, to ensure that you are eating the meal in the proper way.

Overall, I think this will please people who primarily look for IF to have fun scenarios and puzzles that aren't immediately solvable but are fair.

A puzzle-filled pirate-themed adventure: the local publican's daughter has been kidnapped by nasty pirates. To rescue her, you'll need to uncover the mystery of their stolen treasure. Lots of intricate details implemented here: chatty NPCs who respond to lots of conversation topics, a pirate ship that requires nautical directions to navigate, a very cool imprisonment-and-escape sequence. Everything exudes an appropriate 1700s-era flavour. Puzzles aren't easy: I couldn't get past the crate puzzle in the warehouse, which sadly brought an abrupt end to the fun.