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by Cyra Ezekeli


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About the Story

A short story completed in Twine for the Neo-Twiny Jam, which requires 500 words or less.

Final word count: 496 words
Features two possible endings

Contains offensive language and implied possible death.

BG credited to dinVstudio

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Entrant - Neo-Twiny Jam


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A short twine game about rescue and robot , July 17, 2023
by MathBrush
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This game was written for Neo Twiny Jam, in 500 words or less.

In it, you play as a young captain, alienated from your father and crash landing on a planet. Your sarcastic droid gives you comfort in these last times.

This has some great setup but kind of felt unsatisfying at the two ends, for me. The narrative arc felt like it hadn't reached the climax and so hit the ending running. Maybe a paragraph or two of further narration could help, but that would run into the word limit. Overall these characters could work well in other works.

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The End of the Road… or is it?, June 23, 2023
by manonamora
Related reviews: neotwinyjam

A slick, simple and futuristic design, a life-or-death (well, more like almost-death) situation, and a comedic robot… that’s what this entry is offering. Through its shortness, and the grim setting, there are some funny moments, some frightening moments, and some touching moments. The two endings hit a nice punch.

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