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About the Story
A short story completed in Twine for the Neo-Twiny Jam, which requires 500 words or less.
Final word count: 496 words
Features two possible endings
Contains offensive language and implied possible death.
BG credited to dinVstudio
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Entrant - Neo-Twiny Jam
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| Average Rating:   Number of Reviews Written by IFDB Members: 2 |
This game was written for Neo Twiny Jam, in 500 words or less.
In it, you play as a young captain, alienated from your father and crash landing on a planet. Your sarcastic droid gives you comfort in these last times.
This has some great setup but kind of felt unsatisfying at the two ends, for me. The narrative arc felt like it hadn't reached the climax and so hit the ending running. Maybe a paragraph or two of further narration could help, but that would run into the word limit. Overall these characters could work well in other works.
The End of the Road… or is it?, June 23, 2023
A slick, simple and futuristic design, a life-or-death (well, more like almost-death) situation, and a comedic robot… that’s what this entry is offering. Through its shortness, and the grim setting, there are some funny moments, some frightening moments, and some touching moments. The two endings hit a nice punch.
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First Publication Date: June 11, 2023
Current Version: Unknown
Development System: Twine
IFID: 894434B7-F9A9-409E-9AD0-5DB48737201B
TUID: 4447moa7su7so06n
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