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The Orb [WIP]

by Adalil

(based on 2 ratings)
2 reviews3 members have played this game.

About the Story

My first twine, and my first IF!It's still a work in progress since I wanted to submit it to the https://itch.io/jam/neo-twiny-jam
I loved this tool but my programming skills need to improve before I can do cooler stuff.

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Entrant - Neo-Twiny Jam

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Number of Reviews Written by IFDB Members: 2
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
An Invasion and a Strange Orb…, July 15, 2023
Related reviews: neotwinyjam

An alarm awaken you, warning you of a breach in your ship. Tasked to investigate, you come across a group of strangers… and an orb, which you had never seen before and which disappears when you try to touch it.
Unfortunately, there is not more to it, as bugs seem to have removed potential actions (and reached the 3 locked endings). Aside from dying or killing the intruders, there is not much to speak of…

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1 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
Promising start with a few bugs, August 5, 2023
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This game was written for the Neo Twiny Jam in 500 words or yes. It actually had a pretty cool setup and I liked the structure and where the story was going. Unfortunately, it had some broken logic that made multiple errors appear on most pages on both Chrome and Firefox.

Seems like the only thing missing here is more Twine expertise. With some more practice with the code, this game could be great (or the next one the author makes). Right now, I don't think it's finishable, though.

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Game Details

Language: English (en)
First Publication Date: June 30, 2023
Current Version: Unknown
License: Freeware
Development System: Twine
IFID: 4C5FD19C-DEE7-4244-A0CC-9E17418A849C
TUID: 662yiuj8w7qae8x2

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