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The Orion Agenda, by Ryan Weisenberger
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
An excellent mid length sci fi game in 3 sections. Like Star Trek, April 22, 2016

This game is similar to the plot of Star Trek insurrection. You are part of a galactic league which monitors non-spacefaring worlds. A monitoring station has failed, so you must visit it in disguise in a cloaked shuttle to see what is going on.

The first part of the game has some tedious bureaucracy similar to that of stationfall. You then explore an alien village, learning their religion, and so on. The finale of the game is action packed.

Strongly recommended.

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Heavenly, by Jim Aikin
1 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
A small one puzzle game set in heaven, April 22, 2016

In this game, you are an angel bored to death with heaven you can move through three different rooms, which are well described, waiting for something to happen.

When something does happen, you don't have long to act. You only have a couple of turns before losing your chance forever.

I found this game to be less substantial than the other entries in the Jay is games casual gameplay competition, but with excellent writing and a good setting.

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sheep here, by Teaspoon
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
A tiny parser game about a happy happy sheep, April 20, 2016*

Well, I don't know if the sheep is happy, but I was. In the tradition of Lost Pig and baby tree (2 very different games), we have sheep here, a terse, uncapitalized game consisting of brief sentences.

The aesthetic works for the game. A large chunk of the game consists of randomized text, with many clever results.

The game accounts for many, but not all, standard responses. A couple of these responses made me laugh out loud.

The subtitle about non-procedurally generated grass probably refers to a discussion in intfiction and euphoria chat about how randomness is not the same as procedural generation.

This game was entered in the Tiny Utopia jam, providing a fascinating concept of "utopia".

There were a few issues (like the moon being listed after it left), and even more commands could have been implemented. But these are minor quibbles.

* This review was last edited on April 21, 2016
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We Are Unfinished, by Ade McT
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
A short parser game with a haunting atmosphere about a couple, April 20, 2016

This game by Ade McT is an interesting entry in the Tiny Utopias jam. More than any other entry, this game had a haunting, desolate, stoic feel.

You play a character sat at a table who is sorting through pieces of glass in the evening light. Each piece has a story to it.

The game felt almost like a ritualistic cleansing of the soul after a deep wound. I felt like the Utopia in this game could be the healing and strengthening feeling you have after surviving a terrible period in your life. However, it is open to many interpretations.

I had some trouble at the beginning of the game, because I did not notice everything in the room description. Due to the speedy nature of the Tiny Utopias jam, there were many things left unimplemented. However, those who read closely will probably experience no hiccups.

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TinyUtopias Football Manager: Super Soccer Slam Edition, by A. Johanna DeNiro
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A utopian vision of society expressed through a soccer league, April 20, 2016

This is one of the entries in the Tiny Utopia jam. Johanna has picked perhaps the most 'utopian' of all the utopias, as this game provides a direct and detailed vision of a better society.

The writing is fervent, and it is easy to feel the authors conviction and the heart put into the game.

Stylistically, the game has an interesting division of links into different types that works well. While I usually don't include cover art in reviews, I feel that the cover art really suggests a certain interpretation of the game that is hard to put into words.

I did feel a certain lack of options in the game, both of reflective options and of more meaningful choices. This is not always necessary in a Twine game, but I felt like the subject and tone of the game could do with more interaction with the games or your emotional responses. Like usual, this is just my opinion.

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TinyHillside, by Emily Short
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
A bite-sized game about wrapping up a magical life, April 20, 2016

This is an entry in the Tiny Utopias jam. In this short Short Twine game, you play a figure in a medieval-esque world dealing with the aftermath of a magical life.

The writing is Short's characteristic style, with imaginative magical inventions and a dignified but slightly dangerous tone.

I found the game enjoyable, with good interactivity through the design of the links. However, I felt an emotional distance from the narrator, and I felt that the game could have used some more graphical love (the standard Twine styling is not bad, but it didnt seem as effective in this game).

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the morning after, by verityvirtue
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
A tiny utopia jam game about love and work in a mysterious setting, April 20, 2016

This game was made for the tiny utopia jam. The authors version of Utopia is different from many of the other entries. In this short game, you play as a couple in mysterious circumstances. There is peace and happiness, like the other utopias, but there is also challenge, hard work, and a healthy dose of chaos.

I found this to be an effective vision. I am giving this game 3 stars for its emotional delivery, polish (including subtle use of backgrounds), and descriptive writing. However, I felt that the story could have been developed a bit more or wrapped up more neatly. This is a stylistic choice of the author, though, that may work better for some.

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Skull-Scraper, by chandler groover
5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
A brief Twine game about a skull scraper with nice effects, April 20, 2016
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This game is a Tiny Utopia jam game, and Groover has picked an unusual vision for his utopia. You play a skull-scraper in a house of skulls, and you interact with the world in unusual ways.

This game has great production values, with combinations of advanced visuals, sound effects, etc. The setting is macabre but not gory, dark but not depressing.

The writing is well-paced, with a truly beautiful and almost-hidden turning point. Perhaps my favorite Tiny Utopias game.

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Powers of Two, by B Minus Seven
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
A fascinating mini game toying with word choices and association, April 20, 2016

This game was part of the Tiny Utopias game jam. In this game, you select between two words at a time, each selection generating the next two words in a process that is opaque but interesting to experiment with. At every stage, you can change any previous answers, rewinding the game to that point.

This game is small, but it's mechanic is fun. As the name suggests, the number of possible choices is a large power of 2. I found the Utopian part of this game to be the freedom of choice the ability to make decisions in life without criticism or outside analysis. This is obviously up to interpretation.

This game did not affect me emotionally as much as other tiny utopian games, and (although it was meant to be tiny), I wished for a bit longer exploration of the central idea.

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Enough, by Harris Powell-Smith
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A tiny, soothing poem of peace in Twine format., April 20, 2016

This game is an entry in the Tiny Utopias jam, where participants created small games representing some idea of Utopia.

Many people have commented on the peaceful feeling and relaxation this game offers. This is not a puzzle game or a long, strongly branching narrative, both of which are fine; instead, this is a bite-sized poem, most likely to be enjoyed by those in the right mindset looking for something chill.

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