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Curse of the Bat's Tomb

by fsi

2023
Twine

(based on 3 ratings)
3 reviews4 members have played this game. It's on 1 wishlist.

About the Story

Short (498 words) walk in the tomb in the form of a Twine game made for Neo-Twiny Jam.

Twee source code is included for perusal.

Awards

Entrant - Neo-Twiny Jam

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Number of Reviews Written by IFDB Members: 3
2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
A brief Twine game with a puzzle and a twist, July 28, 2023
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This Neo Twiny Jam game, written in 500 words or less, has you exploring your father's crypt after his death.

It seems he has built an enormous tomb, and under great secrecy. But you're determined to find out the truth.

The game has a puzzle or two, and did a good job incorporating exploration and mechanics. All of it was a bit slight; the 500 words was pulled thin, having to handle story, puzzles, etc. but all the pieces that are hear are either already good or promising.

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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
Small well-constructed adventure with a bit of horror, July 6, 2023
by Andrew Schultz (Chicago)
Related reviews: Neo Twiny Jam

Neo Twiny Jam had a surprisingly large (to me) ratio of fantasy-quest games by authors, all of whom really seemed to know what they were doing. There've been a lot of works with emotional impact, too.

But this one combines both, while sneaking in under the maximum word count. I wasn't expecting what the curse was, and you probably won't, either.

Of course, given that it has some narrative, the tomb is not VERY big, or the quest VERY long. There's really only one puzzle and a few things to observe. It's a puzzle you can maybe guess, but said puzzle also has under a hundred states, so figuring an efficient brute-force method is a neat puzzle on its own.

It's a very clean effort, without extra fanfare, and I'm left with a clear feeling the author could (and should!) create something much bigger if they wanted. I'd also like to praise the cover art, which drew me in without grabbing me.

Finally, thanks to the author for including the source, and for telling us to experience their game before looking at it. It's in chapbook, and I used sugarcube in the jam, but several things still made immediate sense to me.

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0 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
And you will never escape it…, July 14, 2023
Related reviews: neotwinyjam

In this small puzzle-y entry, you are faced with a tomb (which you may or may not manage to enter) and the memories of the man buried there. Memories you thought you buried as well…
I liked the puzzle quite a bit~

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