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About the Story
You have just found your target in a bar.
Entrant - Neo-Twiny Jam
Number of Reviews: 2
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This is a short Twine game entered in the Neo Twiny Jam, written in 500 words or less.
It's a fairly well-written story of a woman on the hunt finding a man on the hunt and what ensues.
The styling is appropriate, with red hues. The story is entirely linear, one link at a time. There are at least two significant typos (especially (Spoiler - click to show)'hater' for 'later') which detract from the overall experience.
But I didn't mind reading it, it was pretty fun.
After losing touch for so long, you find your next target to be an old friend. Though they are not that friendly anymore… This entry does a nice job of showing the conflicting feelings of the main character.