Almost Lover (Jam Version)

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A brief vampire tale, July 31, 2023
by MathBrush
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This is a short Twine game entered in the Neo Twiny Jam, written in 500 words or less.

It's a fairly well-written story of a woman on the hunt finding a man on the hunt and what ensues.

The styling is appropriate, with red hues. The story is entirely linear, one link at a time. There are at least two significant typos (especially (Spoiler - click to show)'hater' for 'later') which detract from the overall experience.

But I didn't mind reading it, it was pretty fun.

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