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About the StoryYou're with each other at the beginning and you with each other till the end. You'll let the flames consume you. Together at least. Game Details |
Entrant - Neo-Twiny Jam
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This is an entry in the Neo Twiny Jam, written in less than 500 words.
Rather than focusing on significant branching or mechanics, this story paints a picture of two cursed lovers perishing in the flames.
It has some mild worldbuilding and instead focuses on emotion. I felt like the overall story and vibe worked better than some of the individual phrasing. The characters seemed at a distance from each other, having slow, tender conversations while in a situation that would make speech quite difficult. But I think this author is one I'd like to read more of in the future.
Quite a sad piece about the end of things (life), and the lack of acceptance. No matter your choices, the outcome stays the same - the end does not wait for an eleven-hour miracle. But you know that already. You know everything was doomed from the start. Yet, through the tragic end, there is a promise of never-ending love, of hope, and of meeting again...