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A brief emotional goodbye amidst the flames, July 17, 2023
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This is an entry in the Neo Twiny Jam, written in less than 500 words.

Rather than focusing on significant branching or mechanics, this story paints a picture of two cursed lovers perishing in the flames.

It has some mild worldbuilding and instead focuses on emotion. I felt like the overall story and vibe worked better than some of the individual phrasing. The characters seemed at a distance from each other, having slow, tender conversations while in a situation that would make speech quite difficult. But I think this author is one I'd like to read more of in the future.

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