The Surprising Case of Brian Timmons

The Surprising Case of Brian Timmons is a Lovecraftian adventure based on a scenario for the Call of Cthulhu tabletop RPG, a scenario in turn based on H.P. Lovecraft's short story 'The Case of Charles Dexter Ward'. In spite of its convoluted sounding provenance, this game is actually one of the most accessible Lovecraft IF games out there. A player doesn't need any prior knowledge of the source material or of Lovecraft's work to be able to get into it, and while it's of moderate size, it's more about linear action than the kind of painstaking puzzling folks often associate with Lovecraftian games ala Anchorhead. A word of caution; it's also a game which gets shootier and bloodier as it goes on.

While Lovecraft's protagonists usually have some kind of personal involvement in the supernatural goings-on they face, the PC in Brian Timmons doesn't. He's a detective from the hardboiled school who gets mixed up in a stranger's supernatural goings-on only because they stand between him and his next paycheck. The novelty of adopting an outsider's viewpoint is a welcome one in this busy IF subgenre, and the detective brings humour, attitude and action to the table – three things you normally don't much associate with Lovecraft. The resulting game is straightforward, episodic in a good way and becomes quite gripping as you move towards its climax, though some elements of the delivery could be improved.

Brian Timmons is divided up into scenes set in different locations. Each car trip you take from one location to the next acts like a chapter break, and you don't have to worry about deciding where to go. The hero chooses the next relevant stop as soon as he's got enough fresh leads from the current one. While the game itself suggests you should use ASK and TELL to communicate with its characters – and at times it's essential to use these methods – the majority of communication actually consists of the NPCs telling you their stories one line at a time. While a lot of games use this method and it gets the job done, the game could be richer if it would allow the player to interject with some relevant ASKing and TELLing (as is, the characters only respond on the most vital of topics), though I acknowledge this is never an easy area to program. The characters do a lot of neat fidgeting of their own accord when not speaking, and the game is also generally strong in the area of random atmospheric detail, throwing in lots of little snippets about passers-by, the weather and other environmental changes.

Where the game has some trouble is in getting all of its content to live in the same place tonally, at least at once. When the hardboiled shtick and language are in evidence, they really dominate. But they vanish too easily when the detective isn't delivering his Chandler-esque wisecracks, allowing the game to be overtaken by more utilitarian descriptive text. The sexy dame character is a bit cringy in this light – she triggers the "poured into her dress" remarks in extremis, but in isolation, and thus comes across more as a reminder of the game's tonal wobbling than an authentic seeming femme fatale character justified by the genre and context.

I have a few other nitpicks. The game suffers a bit from empty porch syndrome. It needs a little more proofreading. The inventory limit can aggravate, though this last point is mitigated by the coolness of having a trench coat with pockets of seemingly infinite depth. And it's just fun to wear a trench coat and Fedora in general. I enjoyed The Surprising Case of Brian Timmons a lot. It's also a game which comes without hints, and I was pleased to be made to solve it off my own back, pausing occasionally to scratch my head.

Marshal Tenner Winter's second IF outing places you firmly in the shoes of a private eye thrown into a mysterious case, and (without spoiling anything the game's tags won't tell you) successfully explores Lovecraftian horror themes from the tongue-in-cheek perspective of the lead character. It's nice to play a game where one moment you're laughing at the dialogue and the next squirming at a grisly description.

There's not much in the way of puzzles, this one's more about the story. My only real criticism would be that there isn't quite enough of it, and there's a few non-interactable items. A bit more work would add a lot of polish, so roll on version 2!

Author Marshal Tenner Winter seems to have made something of a personal cottage industry out of adapting modules from the Call of Cthulu RPG into interactive fiction. This work is his first attempt, but the "call of cthulu" tag shows that he followed The Surprising Case of Brian Timmons with no fewer than four other titles, all published in 2013. This group represents about a third of Winter's entire catalog.

The pace of production speaks to a certain hastiness and consequent inattention to quality that is abundantly evident when playing this game. The writing is of lackluster quality, and implementation is extremely minimalist in nature. Scenery items are frequently missing, significant bugs abound, and tone and mood are almost comprehensively mishandled.

In 2013 there was already a model implementation of the core concept (i.e. an adapation of a CoC module) in the form of The King of Shreds and Patches. That title, which features a deep and carefully polished implementation -- is admittedly a tough act to follow, and its author, Jimmy Maher, has spoken about the vast amount of work required to create it. Based on the relative development timelines, I would estimate that at least ten times as much work went into producing The King of Shreds and Patches, and the difference between the two results is like night and day.

To be fair, Maher seems to have been attempting to recreate the sense of illusory freedom that is offered by a tabletop RPG, and he succeeded brilliantly in part through judicious trimming of the possibility space to reduce the burden of implementation while preserving elements of apparent player freedom. Winter's approach to adaptation seems to have been to curtail player freedom so severely that "on rails" is a generous characterization. (On a train, one would at least expect to be able to get some enjoyment from the scenery passing by.) It's a reasonable approach, but attempting to impose a linear sequence automatically undermines the emergent narrative that the module is designed to produce. The author is saddled with the task of crafting a single, coherent storyline out of the multiplex possibilities that can result from different player choices in the RPG version.

I'm sure that task can be done well -- after all, for a well-designed module any one path should be satisfactory -- but it is not done well here. Lovecraftian horror is heavily dependent on suspense arising from the slow buildup of the protagonist's understanding of the true situation. The crisis point is essentially metaphysical in nature, and arrives when the protagonist must accept a radically different order of existence, typically straining his or her sanity to the breaking point (or beyond).

You won't see that in this tale; the protagonist is beyond hardboiled and reacts not at all to the horror. Since the most interesting thing about the premise is the promise of blending horror and hardboiled detective tropes, this is a disappointment.

Infodumps are antithetical to tension, and this game lives by them. Character "interaction" comes primarily in the form of monologue. In a messy room full of books, the only one of plot significance is the only one implemented. Location descriptions are handled with minimal text that does little to evoke dread in the player.

The final sentence of the game is really the most entertaining part, and it wouldn't surprise me if it was inspired by something that happened in a real-life playthrough of the module in question. However, despite being an unexpected gem of humor, it's a poor ending to this particular story -- can you think of any other Lovecraftian tale that ends in a laugh line?

Despite its flaws, I would recommend it to any author interested in producing this type of adapation. The flaws are what make it a worthwhile study, especially when compared and contrasted with The King of Shreds and Patches. However, The Surprising Case of Brian Timmons falls so far short of its implicit animating vision that I can't recommend it as a play experience.