Ratings and Reviews by verityvirtue

View this member's profile

Show reviews only | ratings only
View this member's reviews by tag: 2018 choleric ECTOCOMP ECTOCOMP 2016 IFComp 2015 IFComp 2016 IFComp 2017 IFComp 2018 IFComp 2022 IFComp 2023 Introcomp Ludum Dare melancholic melancholy parser phlegmatic religion Ren'Py sanguine Spring Thing 2015 Spring Thing 2016 sub-Q Tiny Utopias
Previous | 231–240 of 409 | Next | Show All


Contrition, by Porpentine
verityvirtue's Rating:

A(s)century, by Austin Walker
verityvirtue's Rating:

De Baron, by Victor Gijsbers
verityvirtue's Rating:

TinyUtopias Football Manager: Super Soccer Slam Edition, by A. Johanna DeNiro
verityvirtue's Rating:

TinyHillside, by Emily Short
verityvirtue's Rating:

The Role of Music in Your Life, by Five Dials
4 of 4 people found the following review helpful:
An anxious mother seeks a piano teacher, April 19, 2016
by verityvirtue (London)

The Role of Music in Your Life is, on first glance, an odd thing: a questionnaire? Seriously? Is this really IF?

The Role of Music in Your Life expands out into a dialogue-driven, minimal story about an anxious mother and her kid. The character development is handled deftly, especially when the kid in question speaks up, forming a good foil to his mother's perspective. Telling this story through just dialogue raised the possibility of an unreliable narrator, which gave a sinister edge to the mother's lines.

I was disappointed to find that, despite the choices, the story doesn't actually branch. It would have been satisfying, or at least fun, to see how different answers to the personality quiz-type questions affected how the mother treated the PC. Nonetheless, this minimal piece of CYOA has some very clever writing and a delicious use of unreliable narrator. I enjoyed it.

Was this review helpful to you?   Yes   No   Remove vote  
More Options

 | Add a comment 

Tapes, by Jenni Vedenoja
3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
A pastel-hued vignette of a relationship, April 18, 2016
by verityvirtue (London)

Tapes is a linear work about, as the author states, sex and disability. At its centre, though, it is a close-up look into a moment of intimacy. Both characters are shown naked in the game art and they hug-wrestle, but this is not sexual intimacy. This is emotional intimacy: about showing vulnerability to a loved one.

The exact disability from which the PC suffers is never really stated, but from context, we gather that the PC experiences painful muscle spasms which are relieved by kinesiology tape. Is the name important, though?

The sole two reviewers on IFDB (as of this writing) express their distaste at the linearity of this game, but it might be worth having a think on Linear IF, or dynamic fiction, is becoming increasingly accepted. Dynamic fiction borrows the structures and conventions (e.g. second person narrative, platforms) of branching IF to enhance storytelling, either through visual text effects, or by inviting the player to participate in revealing the story step by step. Tapes veers toward the latter, with the game art in each passage illustrating the dialogue.

Tapes is a sweet, peaceful vignette of an intimate moment. Play if you like linear, dialogue-driven scenes and 8-bit art.

Was this review helpful to you?   Yes   No   Remove vote  
More Options

 | Add a comment 

Get Lost!, by S. Woodson
5 of 5 people found the following review helpful:
Faerie ambitions frustrated, April 10, 2016
by verityvirtue (London)

You are a suburban teen and you're tired of your boring, non-magical, human life. Maybe if you go out into the woods where the faeries roam, you can join them - maybe... Of course, that depends on whether they'd want you or not.

Like Beware the Faerie Food You Eat, Get Lost! is a riff on fairy-related tropes, but where BtFFYE is grim, Get Lost! is a merry romp through encounters with jaded, ill-tempered fae. The protagonist's idealistic conceptions of the fae, combined with a comprehensive knowledge of folklore, is quickly frustrated by the ironically mundane nature of the fae themselves.

Woodson's writing sparkles with life, and the broadly branching game structure makes replay richly rewarding. This game is quite short - it took me about 15 minutes to play it through once - so it should make for excellent lunchtime play.

Was this review helpful to you?   Yes   No   Remove vote  
More Options

 | Add a comment 

Mere Anarchy, by Bruno Dias
verityvirtue's Rating:

Eidolon, by A.D. Jansen
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
Puzzles within dreams, March 31, 2016
by verityvirtue (London)

You can't sleep. It's like the insomnia your mother told you about: it's like a seed, and every night you can't sleep, it takes root and germinates... what then?

Eidolon is at first a kind of interactive dream sequence, but it quickly becomes something much weirder. The beginning sequences felt a lot like S Woodson's Beautiful Dreamer. The imagery and NPCs have the surreality of Alice in Wonderland, coloured by faerie folklore. Jansen's writing style favours the weird turn of phrase and evocative metaphors, which suited a story which may or may not exist in your own head.

The story is largely linear, but, unusually for a Twine game, involves some puzzles. These had consistent mechanisms and were meticulously done, with lots of moving parts. Because the story world relies on a bit of symbolism and not taking things too literally, I admit I had some difficulty but... this should not be a problem for most. (Disclaimer: I resorted to the walkthrough here.)

Eidolon is well-written, and much deeper than it first appears. If you like dreamlike stories set in a faerie world, of sorts, or subversions of fantasy quests, then you might like this.

(Originally posted on http://verityvirtue.wordpress.com)

Was this review helpful to you?   Yes   No   Remove vote  
More Options

 | View comments (2) - Add comment 


Previous | 231–240 of 409 | Next | Show All