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Visit Skuga Lake - Masterpiece Edition, by Ryan Veeder
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Etiolated Light, by Lassiter W.
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A mood and a message, May 11, 2023

Of all the games I played from Spring Thing 2023, this one got stuck in my head the most, for a lot of reasons. In a genre that often leans on tropes, the story felt original. I really enjoyed the writing, which truly made me want to escape that horrible place. And rather than just being creepy for creepiness' sake, the game had a lot to say, too. It’s not easy to balance the choices and pace the suspense effectively in a story like this, but Etiolated Light hooked me from the beginning, made me think carefully about my choices, and kept things moving until the end, at which point I immediately wanted to play again to see if I could do better next time.

The thing I like most about this game is that it has a strong point of view. It made me think about the consequences of casually sacrificing others for our own benefit, about the illusion of light and whiteness representing safety, about the advantages of working together to upend an oppressive system. (I haven’t figured out if it’s actually possible to upend this particular system, but someday I’ll find all the endings and know for sure.)

Being able to choose the gender of some characters was also interesting: You don’t know what the consequences will be yet, so you’re as unaware as the player character in the opening scene. It also meshes well with the theme of an ongoing cycle that keeps drawing in new people, leaving everyone vulnerable. And in my case, the pairing of the first two characters ended up subverting the expected dynamic in an interesting way.

I ran across a few minor bugs and typos, but nothing game-breaking. The main thing I found myself missing was a little guidance on how to find the remaining endings—though I did enjoy untangling the story branches by attempting to make different choices.

In short, I think this is a game worth playing. All the endings I found were suitably grim, and some of them made me think about the story and the themes a bit differently, so I think it’s worth replaying, too.

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The Little Match Girl 3: The Escalus Manifold, by Ryan Veeder
8 of 8 people found the following review helpful:
A retro JRPG but it’s a text adventure, March 7, 2023

I was a playtester for this game.

All of the Little Match Girl games follow the titular little girl on a delightful quest through time and space, and I look forward to them every year because they’re so adventurous and funny and surprising. But this one takes the series in a completely unexpected direction by adding a full-blown turn-based combat system, with party members and equippable items and everything. Usually I’m not playing IF (or any games) for the battles, but this game brought back the exact feeling of sitting in front of my little TV in 199X playing SNES with my brother, and it’s honestly amazing that a text adventure can do that.

The combat system is so robust it has its own instruction manual, but the gameplay is pretty straightforward even if you don’t read it (though it definitely helps, and there are some useful options you can toggle). It’s not really violent—this is a good-hearted story with the little match girl as its reluctant hero, after all. And anyway, there’s a lot more to this game than just fighting battles: the story is weighty and wide-ranging, there are strange items from various worlds that you can find and experiment with, and you get to team up with (Spoiler - click to show)a cool-ass mermaid for goodness’ sake. It's clear a lot of care went into every detail, right down to the pitch-perfect barks.

There’s so much going on in this game that it doesn’t feel like it could possibly work, but somehow it does, while carrying on the charming tradition of the first two LMG games—which, if you haven’t played those, I recommend starting there and then reserving a couple hours on a cold winter’s night for this one.

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SPY INTRIGUE, by furkle
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One Final Pitbull Song (at the End of the World), by Paige Morgan
10 of 11 people found the following review helpful:
A grotesque, disorienting, engrossing story about basically everything, January 9, 2023

This game is not like anything I’ve encountered before. I haven’t stopped thinking about it since I finished the final branch weeks ago, in a good way—and yet it’s easy to see why it’s so polarizing. The story is shocking, at times downright repulsive, in ways that I usually would not appreciate. The humor made me laugh, but it also made me wince. The writing is self-aware and full of asides (which I enjoyed, but not everyone does). It’s long, like novel-length long, and there are only a few choice points. Sometimes it almost felt like the game was challenging me to stop playing it so I wouldn’t get far enough to see the vulnerable parts below the surface. But I wanted to know where the heck this story was going. And then right around the time I got to that one scene deep into the first story branch—a horrifying moment that I never would have imagined in a lifetime of ideating—something shifted and I was along for the ride.

It felt like art.

Challenging parts aside, I really enjoyed the story and the way it was constructed. The premise—that the world had ended and a new humanity was born in the distant future, with a reverence for the ancient rapper Pitbull—doesn’t sound very serious, but it’s mined for both comedy and drama (and horror, romance, etc.). Underneath all the blood and guts, this game has heart, and plenty of important things to say. Even without many choices to make, I felt like an active participant, because the static parts periodically check in with the reader and leave room for reflection. Choice and self-determination seems like a major theme, and the fact that the story branches hinge on (Spoiler - click to show)relatively trivial decisions like what side dish you choose struck me as both funny and effective. The structure and ideas reminded me of other stories I’ve loved despite their roughness, like the Zero Escape series, House of Leaves, the work of Vonnegut or Saramago.

So, I’m in awe. I could never have written this game. I think the experience of playing it will make me a better, more vulnerable writer. For me, the difficult parts were rewarding in the end. And the end was really beautiful.

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Even Some More Tales from Castle Balderstone, by Ryan Veeder
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Escape from Hell, by Nils Fagerburg
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Coloratura, by Lynnea Glasser
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Starbreakers, by Emery Joyce and N. Cormier
3 of 3 people found the following review helpful:
A series of puzzles packaged in Twine, October 16, 2021

At its core, Starbreakers is a series of puzzles, but the puzzles are complemented by a slowly unfolding story which wrapped up the game nicely. It's mostly standard math/logic/word puzzles, but a few stood out as particularly creative, and together they formed a fun and satisfying path to the conclusion. Increasingly detailed hints are available in the sidebar, and I appreciated the wink to seasoned puzzlers somewhere in the middle (thank you for not making me do that thing I thought I was going to have to do). Worth an hour or so of your time if you like puzzles but not majorly challenging ones.

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And Then You Come to a House Not Unlike the Previous One, by B.J. Best
8 of 8 people found the following review helpful:
Nostalgic, surprising, multilayered, October 11, 2021

I really appreciated this game as a straightforward narrative, as a reflection on IF nostalgia, and as a multilayered mystery to unravel. The story is beautifully recursive, and the way the gameplay ties itself in knots is just fun. The descriptions and parser responses were entertaining and full of detail. Certain events felt slightly uncomfortable, but resolved in ways that made the conclusion even more satisfying—at least it felt like a conclusion, though it seems very possible I still have more to discover.

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