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Lots to like with this one, October 9, 2022

This was a pleasant enough game. You play as a bartender who is saving up money for a goal of the player's choosing. You interact with customers and mix drinks in a mini-game. It has a colorful and well-themed UI that makes use of lots of little tricks to add detail.

The story is divided up into days, and depending what you choose, you may see different scenarios on different days, my favorite being the visit with the elderly couple. However, I found that there were a lot of repetitive tasks that never varied. I expected the drink-mixing mini game to get more complicated over time, but the only change is to add a timed element. Even when I increased the difficulty, there wasn't any challenge to it. However, if you really enjoy mixing the drinks, you can opt to play an Arcade mode that just focuses on challenges involving the mini game with no story running through it.

It is a fairly upbeat story with comical characters and playful scenarios. However, as it stands now, the grammatical errors are pervasive and jarring. They are on every page, and they disrupt the rhythm of the passages. I usually try to overlook them and focus on the story, but there was no getting around it. Some extensive proofreading and editing is sorely needed.

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manonamora, October 12, 2022 - Reply
(*she/her) Again, I do think your comments were very fair. You are not the only one who pointed this to me.
And I do plan on fixing the grammar/rhythm issue. I hope you'll enjoy the remastered version when it does come out :)
manonamora, October 11, 2022 - Reply
I did exchange some messages with that reviewer over on the Forum about this. There are definitely some issues with the text still (grammar and otherwise). That point stood especially (but not just) on the incorrect use of the em dashes--in terms of grammar rules and over-abundance.
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