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A complex text describing an interaction between old and young, July 18, 2023This game was written for the Neo Twiny Jam in 500 words or less. It's a linear narrative that is taken from an RPG setting or campaign that the author participates in.
The writing is very complex. I had to stop and reread it multiple times to understand what is going on. Even the number of people in the scene was unclear until the second or third playthrough. Allusions are made to many things that are not explained or are unclear. All of this combines to make a rich text that rewards patient exploration. The most interesting part to me was the idea of the time of birth in the day influencing expectations for or names of children.
- Cerfeuil (*Teleports Behind You* Nothing Personnel, Kid), July 3, 2023
- Edo, June 30, 2023
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