Pub Hubbub

by Christopher Drum profile

Slice of life
2021

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Scrub, Bub, Scrub!, May 4, 2021
by Andrew Schultz (Chicago)
Related reviews: PunyJam 2021

With a title like Pub Hubbub, you'd expect a few cheap jokes, and they're the good sort of cheap, the ones that give good return for relatively little investment. The game may not be super-ambitious, but it's a well-organized first effort with enough humor to keep you going through any frustrations you might have with the parser or with the time limitation. An ominous note saying your boss, John, owes $2500 "or else" adds to the plot.

You start in a broom closet, as with every PunyJam entry, and have four pub-cleaning tasks to complete in two hours of game time, or 120 moves. And while standard parser peeves (some rejected commands cost you a move), I was actually able to figure what to do even without logging on to my boss John's computer. The execution required some parser-wrangling, and in fact my first time through I just missed completing everything. Fortunately, nothing drastic happened, and the drudge work makes enough sense it was easy to replicate. Basic stuff you need to do so the pub isn't too nasty.

The game does a good job of brushing off parser mistakes with a joke. Nothing demeaning, but advice from older wiser relatives pops up if you forget something. The rejects for cleaning you don't need to do also amused me, and when I browsed the source code, I found other things I'd missed.

Nothing's too gross or out there, and in fact, there is one way to die that's lampshaded nicely. And there's a cigarette machine which contains more humor than cigarette machines generally do, and even a puzzle.

Given the game's general tone, I was able to figure roughly what the note was about before my boss John came back, and you may, too. But the details still made me laugh.

This is a good, promising first game. It has a few small bugs (or I think they're bugs and not my own incompetence) I'm glad to overlook, because the main stuff seems to work.

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ChristopherDrum, May 17, 2021 - Reply
I appreciate your very fair review and criticism, and am in particular glad you found the humor to your liking. What I lack in game design skill I tried to compensate for with other skills.
Andrew Schultz, May 20, 2021 - Reply
Glad you signed up for IFDB, and that you participated in the jam! I meant to go through it, and your game was the first I tried, and it left me optimistic for others. But I didn't make the time to look into it further.

I'd like to see reviewing the others, though. PunyInform is a neat idea, and reading your source (and others') helped me a lot.

As for game design, don't worry about that. You'll be getting and finding new ideas. The more you play or look, the more likely a good idea is to pop up.

Have you read Graham Nelson's Player's Bill of Rights? That helped me focus so much on good design.
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