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Concerto of Life 3rd Mvt.

by Alby

Episode 3 of Concerto of Life

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About the Story

A short piece of interactive fiction where you read a letter written by your special someone in your old age. Made for Neo-Twiny Jam with a final word count of 500 words.
Customizable Names: Feel free to input real or made up names for you and your partner (the names will not be recorded)
Different Settings: Choose whether your story takes place in a fantasy kingdom or the modern world based on whether you met your partner in a tavern or a bar.
Tip! Clicking on the red text will allow you to cycle between “tavern” and “bar” to choose the setting.

Special thanks to my friends who helped with testing and provided valuable insights and suggestions!

Part 1 of 3 | Part 2 of 3 | Part 3 of 3

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Hi, Tie, Bye, August 23, 2023
by Andrew Schultz (Chicago)
Related reviews: Neo Twiny Jam

Well, you got three 500-word entries in the Neo Twiny Jam, and the moderators gave the author their blessing to write entries as sequels of each other and I think the author made a good choice here. Perhaps if too many authors tried this, I'd say "hey, come on, write very different stories," but it acted as a relatively strong baseline, not trying to be to fancy or evoke too many emotions, and the 500-word limits provided balance. It was a good introduction to NTJ for me. But it definitely had its mystery!

You see, I managed to bungle things and read the second part first. As a result, I certainly was left wondering whether there was a breakup or whether someone was dying. I actually leaned towards the breakup and wondered if the third part had reconciliation! And of course I wondered how they met, and the first part probably hit harder than if I'd read them in order.

However, it is about death impending. It's very smooth, and while the interactivity isn’t huge beyond putting in names and choosing a few locations, that doesn’t affect much for me. It is about, well, people finding each other and living a life together, and their hopes for the beyond.

Re-reading it I was amused to note how it seemed to incorporate fantasy tropes (going out on adventures) as feeling like, maybe, a high-paying job in the real world that required a lot of travel. This was unexpected. I also enjoyed the brief discussion of their one kid much different than them. One generally doesn't think of such things, or you suspect character classes stay in the family, even if you need one of each class to go on a quest.

A longer word count might've caused it all to get too maudlin. I’m glad the author used these entries the way they did. I think the results were different than they would have been for, say, a 1500-word limit jam. It all felt well-paced and balanced. While the maximum interactivity may be picking the passages up after a week away and trying a different one first, I indeed did so. I enjoyed sketching the lives of the letter writer and receiver together in my mind, filling in the holes.

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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
The finale of a trio of tiny games, July 16, 2023
by MathBrush
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This is the final game in the series, and while it doesn't pull out too many surprises compared to the first two, it's a fitting conclusion.

Like the others, you put in a couple of names and choose between two worlds. This is a bit surprising, as the main character of the last two games (Spoiler - click to show)died, but it makes more sense as you play.

I enjoyed the small trio of games. It was perhaps a bit overwrought at times, but it works with the styling.

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