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goodnight

by Rylie Eric

2023

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(based on 2 ratings)
2 reviews

About the Story

A Twine story where you go to bed. Except your thoughts prevent you from sleeping.
This story contains 495 words (Excluding the title screen and images, which would make it 499 if they were included) and is a linear experience made for Neo-Twiny Jam and Trans Representation Jam 2023.

CONTENT WARNINGS
Suicide (considered), depression (implied?)I am not used to writing these warnings (my games have never been like this before and in this case particularly, most of what I thought might of been subjective) so let me know if I could improve something here.


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A night of troubled thoughts, August 5, 2023
by MathBrush
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This game was written for the Neo Twiny Jam in 500 words or less.

It uses all of its words in one path, a torrent of thoughts that pile on. The narrator lies in bed with thought after anxious thought crowding the mind. Thoughts of death, of unimportance, come endlessly.

There is some comfort in the end, at the hand of a friend. Overall, the feeling is of a storm followed by sunlight, observing the wreckage.

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When thoughts are stronger than sleep…, July 15, 2023
by manonamora
Related reviews: neotwinyjam

Unable to sleep, you lie awake. Prisoner to your thoughts, fears, and worries. Spiralling and thinking about the worst, with no way out. Wanting to be seen, but afraid of reaction. Wanting to live as your authentic self, but worrying/knowing acceptance won’t be given. It is hard to find sleep when you mind is filled with thoughts…

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