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1-5 of 5 - Edo, November 15, 2023
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A kind of confusing Twine game about gangsters and...stuff, April 8, 2020This seems like a first-time Twine author's game, with at least no broken links.
The writing is rushed and seems untested. Here's a sample:
"He pulls out a big rotten fish and throws at you, it hits at at the head and knocks you unconcious."
There is some funny humor, but a lot of it didn't make sense even as nonsensical humor.
I think this just needs to be heavily revised. At its best, it could end up like the madcap game Escape the Crazy Place, but at its worst it still represents a step forward for the author.
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