Kyrie Eleison

by Lapin Lunaire Games profile

Fantasy
2023

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Unhappy vampires at the end, July 25, 2023
by MathBrush
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This game was written for the Neo Twiny Jam in 500 words or less.

I like Vampire stories in general (original Dracula, Twilight series, VtM and its associated Choicescript Games, Interview with a Vampire when I was a kid). This game plays on the relationship between a vampire and her Creator, and their back and forth pain.

It was well written in general, but there was so much left unsaid. A lot of the descriptions are vague generalities that hit the right notes but might (for my personal taste, maybe not same as author) benefit from having a bit more specificity from time to time. I feel like this author must be good at writing dreams.

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