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Distance & Mirage

by HeartForge

2023

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(based on 2 ratings)
2 reviews

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Laurel disappeared when the two of you were just stupid kids, playing out past your curfew. The thing at the molten heart of the desert?

It knows something.

Enjoy my entry for the 2023 Neo-Twiny Jam !! Total word count ended at 500 even.


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A brief preliminary to a greater story, July 18, 2023
by MathBrush
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This short game, entered in the Neo Twiny Jam, serves as a brief introduction to a greater story.

It has an interesting mix; a dangerous location, a mysterious facility, weird beetles, and a connection with someone you're desperate to find.

All of these blend together well, and the setup looks nice. If it were to continue, I could imagine it being a powerful story. As it is, in < 500 words, it only manages to give the beginning of the prologue.

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On your way to find some answers…, June 15, 2023
by manonamora
Related reviews: neotwinyjam

A childhood friend disappeared, but you will never stop trying to find some answers. A meeting has been set between you and a thing, which may have some answers. But you are not there yet…

The descriptions in this entry are very vivid and coarse, very much like the setting of the story. I also liked the use of the mouseover to change some aspects of the story.

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