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At the Poison's Edge

by Natasha Luna profile

(based on 5 ratings)
2 reviews9 members have played this game. It's on 1 wishlist.

About the Story

You and Vincent were lovers. Now you are at death's door with his hand-mixed poison flowing through your veins.

Having used his diary to track him down for a confrontation, this is your last chance to end things once and for all. What will you do with this opportunity?

At the Poison's Edge is a gothic horror micro visual novel created in 10 days for Only One of Any Asset Jam 2023 (which limits games to <1000 words, 1 sprite, 1 background, 1 music track, and 1 sound effect) and Single Choice Jam (which limits games to a single choice).

Content warning: Death; attempted murder by a romantic partner; attempted death by suicide. Recommended 16+

Features:

  • 992 words
  • 1 sprite
  • 1 background
  • 1 music track
  • 1 choice, leading to 4 possible endings
  • A(n ex-)boyfriend who tried to kill you, but maybe he's not all bad? (Or maybe he is.)
  • A gender-neutral protagonist
  • Font selection (Crimson Text, Sylexiad Serif, Atkinson Hyperlegible)
  • Toggle for image captions (can be used with Ren'Py's built-in TTS by pressing V on the keyboard) and sound captions

Credits

  • Writing & programming: Natasha Luna
  • Sprite & key art: A Jen Bird
  • Background art: Meagan Trott
  • GUI art & logo: Jujube (Jooby)
  • Music: Eric Jeffrey Tan

Awards

Entrant - Single Choice Jam

42nd Place, Best in Show - The IF Short Games Showcase 2023

Ratings and Reviews

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Average Rating: based on 5 ratings
Number of Reviews Written by IFDB Members: 2
1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A twine game built with minimal assets and choices, September 13, 2023
Related reviews: less than 15 minutes

This game is built around a pretty tight set of constraints, with limited words, graphics, choices, and music. But it manages to do some nice worldbuilding and scene setting in that time.

You play as a character who has been poisoned by their lover, a dashing rogue of a man. You have tracked him down, and have one choice to try to secure the antidote from him.

Due to the constraints, there is only one choice, one background image, one character image, etc. but what it comes up with is pretty memorable. It's not in any way a complete story, feeling more like a vignette from a larger work.

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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
Confront your… lover?, August 21, 2023
Related reviews: singlechoice

This short VN starts with a bang… or more accurately, poison. Realising what your lover may have done, you go onto confront him, and maybe get the antidote to avoid your demise.

You have multiple options to confront the man, some with violence, some pleading with his heart, and one asking Why. The truth lies in the lies, and life sometimes lies in death. Your survival is never really into question, but your feelings are another deal…

I wasn’t left completely satisfied with this entry. With the limited amount of words, it is hard to have a concise story pulling punches. In my case, it didn’t. Maybe because the outcome change little, or maybe because most is left unexplained. But maybe you’re not supposed to feel satisfied. Life usually isn’t…

The visuals however were lovely, and so was the addition of sound.

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Outstanding Ren'py Game of 2023 by MathBrush
This poll is part of the 2023 IFDB Awards. The rules for the competition can be found here, and a list of all categories can be found here. This award is for the best Ren'py game of 2023. Voting is open to all IFDB members. Eligible...

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