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It's Killing Time, by Eric Bonholtzer
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Inside the Mouth of the Clown, by D.B.T
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INFECTED (Click Your Poison), by James Schannep
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Hard Puzzle 2 : The Cow, The Stool and Other Animals, by Ade McT
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Fahrenheit 451, by Len Neufeld and Ray Bradbury
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Eczema Angel Orifice, by Porpentine
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Behind Closed Doors 3: Revenge of the Ants, by John Wilson
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What Fuwa Bansaku Found, by Chandler Groover
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interactive haiku, January 6, 2016
by namekuseijin (anywhere but home)

Or almost it, as the prose is pretty economic and the game very short.

I have mixed feelings about this one. The story and setting are as fascinating as any japanese youkai stories, the writing goes through pains to emulate that archaic japanese narrative style. Thumbs up.

However, I fear Inform was not the right tool here: this clearly is a fairly linear twine game in disguise. The action is simply typing in the "advance" link or typing the "examine thing" links. There're no puzzles but the puzzling short story. So, the interaction is pretty much just a glorified "next paragraph, please" link, like much interactive fiction these days.

I don't want to bash it because I see good will here and I liked the story. Go read it and have a blast...

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walking home, by spinach
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dontPush, by Filamena Young
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a 2-star is born, January 3, 2016
by namekuseijin (anywhere but home)

This is a "game" about birthing a child, or many children, perhaps twins, perhaps lots of curbs. I'll never know, because this anti-cesarean piece of propaganda employs such generic prose that you're never too sure of anything - as far as I know, this could be about a transzombie bringing new baby transzombies into an apocalyptic future world. I'm fond of stories with well-delineated characters where you get to be somebody else rather than filling all the generic blanks lazy authors leave to you. This is supposedly autobiographical, but when it says you are at work, or sword playing or whatever, it's not really.

As for interaction, most of it consisting clicking "So..." and reading the next paragraph. There are a few choices, sure, but they seem to be irrelevant and lead into the same next plot point in an essentially linear narrative.

but, hey, if it's really autobiographical, be sure to lend a few pennies to the author's patreon. Baby needs are expensive.

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