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Destination Unknown, by Mark Mihalko
Too rushed and eventually falls apart..., December 19, 2016

Some of the descriptions on the ship are good, but the story's too rushed to be able to build up any tension. As it goes on it starts to fall apart more, as though the author made it up as they went- some things aren't resolved, the story abruptly changes direction, and it finally just suddenly ends... and the characters' reactions aren't that believable.

There are some multiple choices that randomly kill you out of the blue with some weird unrelated occurrence.

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Trapped , by Amaranth.Ai
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Kinsale Horror, by Arek Arktos
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Darkened Dreams, by StoryP4nda
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Heretic Dreams, by Harris Powell-Smith
Stolen power, December 15, 2016

A short game where you're forced to make tough decisions, though you may not understand the implications of some of them at the time. Though short, the writing means it's impossible not to get emotionally invested in the outcome for the characters involved- and there are multiple endings.

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The Darkest Fear, by SCrumley
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Carnival of Shadows, by Craig Dutton
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Pale, by Ally Vordan
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Unfinished, September 2, 2016

The story has an interesting start and setting, and seems like it might be leading in some intriguing directions- but it's completely unfinished.

It's meant to eventually have two characters to choose between, but even with the one character available now it terminates after a bit in an 'insert paragraph here' placeholder; I tried the story twice using different options and both ended up this way after a while.
It's an interesting premise, although lacking in logic a bit in some places- everyone in the town seems unwaveringly convinced you're a murderer just by you being the first one to discover a body...

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Old fogey, by Simon Deimel
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Beneath Floes, by Bravemule; Pinnguaq
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