Ratings and Reviews by Jason Lautzenheiser

A short little piece that puts you in the role of a door (to where, not sure), and gives you choices on who to let pass and who not. That's really it. Your decisions determine which path through the story you take. Currently not a ton of different options, but a few clever ones and some that don't really make a difference which you choose.

If the author chooses to expand this, I think it would have great potential to tell a much more interesting and deep story then it does now. I gave it three stars simply because of the potential and because of the ideas it has generated for myself.

I really enjoyed this one. The atmosphere in this was well done and surprisingly creepy. There was actually one spot where I actually jumped a little. (Spoiler - click to show)Look at the TV in the one room where it's on. The parser was well done too, there were very few times where I was searching for the correct word and many of the words I tried had at least some response. I actually tried breaking the parser to try find some flaws and found very few.

It's truly a shame these weren't completed as I really want to see what happens next. Only reason I gave it four stars is because it is very short and though I want more, I'm left hanging.

Nice job, perhaps the author will come back someday and finish this series.