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The Cuban Missle Crisis-Khrushchev, by b.lee
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The Cuban Missle Crisis- John F. Kennedy, by b.lee
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Door Simulator, by Giggling_Kiste
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Interesting idea, has some potential if expanded, October 5, 2013
by Jason Lautzenheiser (Navarre, Ohio)

A short little piece that puts you in the role of a door (to where, not sure), and gives you choices on who to let pass and who not. That's really it. Your decisions determine which path through the story you take. Currently not a ton of different options, but a few clever ones and some that don't really make a difference which you choose.

If the author chooses to expand this, I think it would have great potential to tell a much more interesting and deep story then it does now. I gave it three stars simply because of the potential and because of the ideas it has generated for myself.

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The Intruder, by Shane Anderson
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baby tree, by Lester Galin
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The Example of the Chicken Sexer, by Simon Christiansen
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The Warbler's Nest, by Jason McIntosh
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1981, by Anonymous
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9:05, by Adam Cadre
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The Act of Misdirection, by Callico Harrison
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