This game was entered in the Text Adventure Literacy Jam, designed to introduce newcomers to the genre.
It was co-written with a kid, who has provided the art for it, which gives the game a pretty awesome feel. I especially enjoyed the lettering on the parachute.
The game is well-fit for an introductory game, with good programming, a generally easy but dramatic set of puzzles, and a lot of humor.
The plot is a bit silly so some things didn't make much sense, but I don't think 'makese sense' was high on the list of priorities here; it seems like 'have fun' and 'be cool' were higher priorities, and it succeeds at both of those.