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Something,, January 18, 2021

This time, the author actually wrote more words, it changes nothing, though.

Story: You are sick. you make appointments with doctors to cure said sickness, while boring enough, the author decided to make the game repetitive as heck. The practically same pages blipped past one by one, name changing was the only thing that was different. Basically caused me to lose focus 10% of the way through.

Effort: More than the others, I'll give him that. There were innumerable grammar mistakes, no attempt at spicying up the plot and dragging readers in.

Honestly, makes me wonder how old the author actually is.

Conclusion: Don't play it. It has about as much plot as the other games made by him, and eternally more boring.

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