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(based on 3 ratings) 2 reviews
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Language: English (en) First Publication Date: October 12, 2012 Current Version: Unknown
License: Freeware Development System: Twine
IFID: Unknown
TUID:
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4 people found the following review helpful:
You're Sick, January 18, 2021That's the entire plot and story here. Really, there's not much more than that. There's a few choices throughout the story, but none seem to really affect the storyline -- no matter what options you choose, you're still sick and you're going to see the doctor. Then, quite suddenly, the story ends. This really could be a lot more, but there's just not really any progression in the story -- it doesn't go anywhere at all.
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3 people found the following review helpful:
Something,, January 18, 2021This time, the author actually wrote more words, it changes nothing, though.
Story: You are sick. you make appointments with doctors to cure said sickness, while boring enough, the author decided to make the game repetitive as heck. The practically same pages blipped past one by one, name changing was the only thing that was different. Basically caused me to lose focus 10% of the way through.
Effort: More than the others, I'll give him that. There were innumerable grammar mistakes, no attempt at spicying up the plot and dragging readers in.
Honestly, makes me wonder how old the author actually is.
Conclusion: Don't play it. It has about as much plot as the other games made by him, and eternally more boring.
This is version 1 of this page, edited by oceow
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