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About the Story You're there right next to me, and yet it almost feels as if there are miles filling the distance between us. Game Details
Language: English (en)
First Publication Date: October 15, 2023 Current Version: Unknown Development System: ChoiceScript IFID: Unknown TUID: os8ni5a1w3szfuot |
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A short cute kinetic(-ish) story about the what are/could/should have been in ChoiceScript. The writing is full of emotion, (unrequited?) feelings, and maybe even a hint of regret. Retrospection is a big focus of the story itself.
A strange thing from it was the choice of the You's and I's here. In usual ChoiceScript fashion, the main body of the text refers to the player as You, while it uses I for the choice options. In this game, You's and I's share the same space. Are we supposed to be the I and reflect on our feelings and relationships? or the You and discover how bad of a friends we probably are?
The ambiguity of it made me a bit confused, but I liked it as well.
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