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- dollweiss, April 7, 2022

Short and sweet, November 19, 2015

I am new to modern interactive fiction. I loved adventure stories when I was younger. I did enjoy the story and I think that it was very funny. Hell, I don't think I could do better myself! After playing the story, I saw the name of the author. I don't know, but I think from his name he might be Belgian or Dutch. That said, I think that the spelling mistakes actually add to the adventure. At first, I was annoyed by them, but then I felt as if I was being caught up in the same excitement as the author.

So, nice story! Just hope I didn't make too many grammatical and spelling mistakes in my review.

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- E.K., September 1, 2013

2 of 2 people found the following review helpful:
Not Bad!, August 24, 2013
by Hanon Ondricek (United States)

This is a quick little adventure with some funny writing by the same author as Astro Turf Space Golf which I appreciated for it's writing but didn't appreciate for the fact that it forced you into a bad ending.

Lines like these I love: (Spoiler - click to show)"You couldn't possibly run faster to the garage. Well, maybe you could if Snicker wasn't so fucking fat."

This story is also quite bluntly brutal. I accidentally used my neighbor as a human shield.

I only took one play-through, and seemed to get a good ending. (Spoiler - click to show)I got into the car and ran over both of the intruders, Snicker described as "Chewbacca to my Han Solo." I look forward to this author creating a longer and more involved work.

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