Dogleash

by Rusteen Honardoost

2013
Twine

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Not Bad!, August 24, 2013
by Hanon Ondricek (United States)

This is a quick little adventure with some funny writing by the same author as Astro Turf Space Golf which I appreciated for it's writing but didn't appreciate for the fact that it forced you into a bad ending.

Lines like these I love: (Spoiler - click to show)"You couldn't possibly run faster to the garage. Well, maybe you could if Snicker wasn't so fucking fat."

This story is also quite bluntly brutal. I accidentally used my neighbor as a human shield.

I only took one play-through, and seemed to get a good ending. (Spoiler - click to show)I got into the car and ran over both of the intruders, Snicker described as "Chewbacca to my Han Solo." I look forward to this author creating a longer and more involved work.

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rusteenh, August 24, 2013 - Reply
Thanks for another review. I took your comments from Astro Turf Space Golf seriously, and made something more open ended. This is a new medium for me, but I'm really enjoying it. I hope you keep checking out my work! This was more elaborate than the last one, and I hope to make the next one even more so.
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