I am new to modern interactive fiction. I loved adventure stories when I was younger. I did enjoy the story and I think that it was very funny. Hell, I don't think I could do better myself! After playing the story, I saw the name of the author. I don't know, but I think from his name he might be Belgian or Dutch. That said, I think that the spelling mistakes actually add to the adventure. At first, I was annoyed by them, but then I felt as if I was being caught up in the same excitement as the author.
So, nice story! Just hope I didn't make too many grammatical and spelling mistakes in my review.