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one way

by Rylie Eric profile

2024
Paint.net, Twine

(based on 1 rating)
1 review2 members have played this game.

About the Story

Syn texts someone, hoping for a response... eventually. Made for the Neo-Twiny Jam 2024 and Trans Representation Jam 24.
This game contains self-hate.
The person Syn is texting to is not you.

Ratings and Reviews

A conversation, July 8, 2024
Related reviews: neotwinyjam

one way is a short kinetic dialogue through text between Syn and Lily, though it feels more like a monologue, as the latter doesn’t respond much. In the messages, Syn talks about the writing progress (or lack of) on a story, and the struggles of being relatable, even when drawing on one’s identity. The messages go unanswered, worrying Syn, who ends up confronting Lily for a sign of life.

Because of that one-sidedness in the exchange, and the minimal formatting, I thought at first I was reading Syn’s diary entries (the first few pages being pretty relatable, being in a writing rut is not fun). Though it was after going through the passages again did I wonder whether we were playing as Lily, clicking the arrow link to forward time, as if reading but avoiding answering, making Syn’s plea for a response all the more heartbreaking.
Or maybe I’m reading too much into it, and we’re simply a complete outsider.

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Game Details

Language: English (en)
First Publication Date: July 1, 2024
Current Version: Unknown
License: Freeware
Development System: Paint.net, Twine
IFID: F7EFD23E-6647-42F5-A762-EAA51D111D0F
TUID: j5vb3zko4yj6wvo4

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