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A grim tale told in Ink, July 20, 2023
by MathBrush
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This game was written in 500 words or less for the Neo Twiny Jam, using Ink.

It is brief and linear, but told with appropriate dualities. The design is stark white and black; the game is in either French or English; and love and marriage are contrasted with bitterness and funeral.

The story is of two men, wedded, who fight fiercely. Their story is told in reverse, from the end of the marriage to the beginning.

I imagined the envelope at the beginning to be divorce papers; I remember for my own when it became real enough to have papers to sign. That was quite the day! Overall, despite its simple structure, the strong storytelling shines.

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manonamora, July 21, 2023 - Reply
Thank you!!
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