Carry On.

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Keep Calm?, June 26, 2024

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Carry On. is a short sci-fi Twine piece, broken into two scenes (seemingly unrelated? I am not quite sure, the break between the two is a bit jarring/confusing). You are a space farer at the start of a mission, looking for your captain, and finding more than you asked. That second part is a bit chilling, and made it feel like the whole was some sort of demo or prototype for a larger piece (it does set a bit of mystery/confrontation that would make for a neat game).

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Vitalia, June 18, 2025 - Reply
Hey, dev here.

The break is mainly due to word limit in the neo-twiny jam.

The scenes are related: the girl from first scene (Spoiler - click to show) is tied under the bed in the Captain's room (she isn't supposed to be on the ship).

Yes, it is an intro. Before jam I didn't have any further idea, so it was like a short story. While working on the jam, I got the idea what happens next, so it is an intro to the upcoming big game.

Thanks for playing!

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