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Review
This is a short story written in Twine that was entered into the Bluebeard Jam.
I was first struck upon playing it by its nice presentation and how well-written it was. I loved the voice of the narrator and the interesting details.
Later on, at the time the protagonist approached (Spoiler - click to show)the basement door, I began to lost the thread of the story, and I quickly became confused. The writing was still effective, I just couldn't picture the plot in my mind.
I thought there might be a choice at the end, like the Single Choice Jam, but it was just a story in the end, with links used only for pacing.
