20 Strokes

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Slice of life

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Short and quirky, March 17, 2014
by Rhetta_Lynnea (State of Denial)

I gave this 3 stars not because there are any problems, but because there's not really much substance. However, it's a fun little diversion with a nicely polished interface. Definitely worth the two minutes it will take you to play!

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Hanon Ondricek, March 17, 2014 - Reply
If it only takes you two minutes to play, you might have missed something. Which is kind of cool.

(Spoiler - click to show)I liked how this observant slice-of-life sandwich has a sharp sliver of fear and death in it. A quick swimmer only skims the surface, however. It was chilling enough that I am almost reluctant to read again and see how far it goes. I got an abrupt, jokey ending that I didn't think served the whole.

Perfect color choices enhance the recollection of being in a deep cold public pool with no visible end.
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