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Void: Corporation

by Jonathan Lim

Science Fiction
2000

(based on 5 ratings)
5 reviews

About the Story

"VOID: CORPORATION is a short AGT game set in a cyberpunk world I invented when I was a kid. Generally, a fairly easy game (so I am assured) looking at a wider universe! It's also my first "serious" game, so be kind..." [--blurb from Competition Aught-Zero]


Game Details

Language: English (en)
Current Version: competition release
License: Freeware
Development System: AGT
Baf's Guide ID: 1129
IFID: Unknown
TUID: abmlyee1l9kd6ygm

Awards

41st Place - 6th Annual Interactive Fiction Competition (2000)

Editorial Reviews

SynTax
The gameworld of VOID has a neat geography, covering about 32 locations, and most room descriptions are vivid and quite lengthy, which all helps to give VOID an interesting and entirely "believable" atmosphere. Jonathan Lim has clearly created a very detailed fictional world for his RPGs, comics and game, and has the writing skills to portray this world very well. Unfortunately there's always a "but..."; and in this case it's that he hasn't the necessary programming skills to make VOID work as a text adventure. It's obviously the same agent who keeps on reappearing time after time to confront you, and on typing and entering "shoot agent with pistol" you get the same response each time - "it disappears in a cloud of red smoke" - a dead giveaway that the author hasn't been able to overcome many of the standard AGT response messages by using his own command file in the game, and has merely written a "standard" AGT game, the most basic type possible.

-- Bev Truter
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SynTax
Although not a literary masterpiece, the story is intriguing and the game is reasonably well-written. I had problem in that you can't PUSH BLUE BUTTON you must simply PUSH BUTTON or it doesn't work, despite this being in the walk through.

-- Dorothy Millard
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>VERBOSE -- Paul O'Brian's Interactive Fiction Page

In any case, there are problems in this game that definitely cannot be blamed on AGT. For example, one of the critical puzzles in the game depends on the PC going in a direction that is not indicated as available in the room description. This, mind you, when every single possible exit is listed in every other room description. Hasn't the UN passed a resolution or something against games behaving like this? In fairness to the game, it's true that a hint toward this action is given at one point, but in fairness to me, the descriptions do little to indicate in what location the hint is applicable, and in any case that's still no excuse for leaving an exit unlisted when all others are. This is definitely the worst offender among the puzzles, but every aspect of Void, from the design to the writing to the plot to the coding, is tarnished with flaws. Some of these aspects have a genuine spark of excitement, or at least the possibility of such, but in the end, VOID: Corporation is a game that promises far more than it delivers.
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From the Author

I can't believe this thing is still here...

Yes, I am the author of this game. I never wrote another one. As some people have divined, "Void: Corporation" is both laughably amateurish and deeply lodged in my own past.

I am simply astonished that this game still exists (time of writing being 2019), received reviews I never knew about, and received a user review as recently as two years ago. I have taken so long to find this out that the links to the full reviews of the game largely do not work.

In the year 1996 my brother introduced me to the idea of role-playing games - not formal, commercial games with dice, but highly informal games which needed only a gamemaster, who operated as a kind of superintelligent computer running a verbal text adventure. We improvised everything; non player character responses, combat outcomes, the fate of armies. The gamemaster would simply tell the story and improvise outcomes. It is a form of entertainment that should be familiar to the player of interactive fiction - but with nothing programmed, and no trace left behind.

I am moved to find the readme document attached to the game for instance. Who would have thought that I would one day wish I had recorded all those lengthy and epic adventures? Now I can remember very few of them. I find reference to the murder of Grand-Admiral Pentonville on Skylab 7, an incident that heralded a new and darker period in the war, in which government agents called the FMI were as deadly as the alleged foe. I also find reference to Wen-Gao Ren, an ancient and goodly comrade to the main character Pip Martyn; so steadfast and dependable in battle, his talents taking him to the Admiralship. How fine a soldier; and how sad the day when he betrayed all his friends in a bloody coup and tried to take over the Federation government.

Other epic events linger at the back of the mind; the fighter pilot Paul Ashwin whose brother Peter Ashwin had joined the Secessionists; Paul was willing to shoot down his brother to save his friends, but then deliberately crashed his ship in despair. The epic Battle of Ceres, in which Chuck Jackson, the loner American with blue hair, had his wing shorn off by a cable holding up the notorious tower-fortress. Dan Clayman, with his endless mojitos, being "bailed out" of Tewkesbury Station after assassinating mob boss Vincent Talbot, gunfire scattering around his feet.

I wrote the IF game after the role playing was largely over; it was sort of a tribute to those days in restaurants when my brother and I would be leaning over our steaks hammering out the next adventure in the tale. The tales of "Void" and "Void: Corporation" must have then been almost over; for Wen-Gao Ren had turned traitor and the war virtually over. It was also a palliative for an extremely painful time in my life; I was diagnosed with depression around the time I submitted the game or slightly after - in retrospect I should have been diagnosed some years earlier.

I am a published author now; I like to think that a great deal of what I learned about writing came from those immense improvised epics - and I hope some fragment of the flavour of those tales comes through the total amateurishness of the game.

*****

To clarify certain aspects of what I write about these RPGs; the original RPG of 1996 was "Void", which dealt mostly with space battles and whose name referred to the void of space. The main character of those RPGs was the pilot Pip Martyn. Contrary to what the readme file says, I intended the space war to last from 2051 to 2055 (the file says 2052 to 2055). The RPG, however, I deliberately started in medias res in 2053; we never did do a "prequel"!

The followup RPG started when I was "contaminated" by cyberpunk reading around 1998. Since this was a cyberpunky "spinoff" we called it "Void: Corporation". That, I hope, explains the somewhat odd name of the game. The main character here was Dan Clayman. I somewhat wish that the game had been based on "Void" instead, since those war stories were more epic!

*****

One final word. A very early review of this game, now apparently lost, pointed to the motto of the FMI as being "possibly unintentionally hilarious". The motto is "We Really Want To Serve With Integrity". My brother was delighted with that review, when I told him, for the motto was his idea entirely. It was intentionally funny, and we both used to laugh over it. Something about protesting too much...

*****

PPS: The game came 41st out of 60 in that year. However, there must have been a surfeit of prizes that year, because I got a prize. It was a series of weird mini sculptures made out of coloured dice by Andrew Plotkin himself! These were typical of the sort of objects one might find in a Plotkin game I always thought. He was very friendly in his email. I may still have a couple of those sculptures somewhere.


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1 of 1 people found the following review helpful:
A fun but under-implemented AGT cyberpunk spy game, July 16, 2017
by MathBrush
Related reviews: about 1 hour

In this AGT game (a parser that I find better than ADRIFT but not as good as Inform or TADS), you have to navigate an enemy stronghold using different cubes of software and slabs and pills.

It's not very polished at all, and the parser has some troubles, and the story has gaping plotholes (it's super easy to walk into enemy barracks and take things from soldiers). But it has a charm to it, and the story seems really deeply thought out; the author says they invented the world in their youth.


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