Number of Reviews: 3
Write a review A time-travel loop game about a school and potatoes, April 30, 2022
This game has a great deal of potential but unfortunately doesn't pan out yet in many areas. From reading about the game, I wonder if a lot of time was spent trying out different interactive fiction engines.
You play as a young high school student who goes to school and gets stuck in a time loop. You have to replay over and over to progress.
I had a bit of trouble with figuring out how the game worked. A lot of options seem to send you to a fake-death the first time you go to them, but then they are important later.
The formatting uses centered text and no paragraph breaks. I think it would have been a bit easier to read with left-aligned text and paragraph breaks, and using a serif font and colors with less contrast than pure black and pure white.
The writing has grammar that sounds off, especially with comma use or punctuation around quotations.
Overall, I think the underlying idea is solid and there are some funny moments, but I felt unsatisfied.