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"With blackbirds following me, I'm digging out my grave. They close in, swallowing me, the pain, it comes in waves. I'm getting back, what I gave.”
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Starts off with "you rape her" as the only option then (Spoiler - click to show)"My darling, you deserve better" on the next page though the rapist enjoys suffering, so it really doesn't make sense. Pointlessly edgy story without enough detail to involve the reader. It's over before you blink and there simply isn't enough content to be worth this review given its lack of polish.
Now wait, before you go blasting me for that title of this review, let me explain: those are the author's words. That's the comment the author put out for this story. I'm not saying I'm arguing with that opinion, either. This is a very, very short story (less than 800 words) and as you might imagine, there's not really any story in content that short. I don't know what it has to do with blackbirds, but on the very first page your only option is to rape someone. I'm really not sure what to do with that, that's not my idea of a story. If, for some reason, a story absolutely has to have that kind of content, I might suggest that a character in the story should be doing that instead of putting the reader in that kind of situation. Seriously, don't bother with this one.