Eliza's Unbearable Awkward Reunion!

by Lance Cirone profile

Comedy
2023

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A truly awkward moment, August 7, 2023
by MathBrush
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This game was written for the Neo Twiny Jam in 500 words or less.

I saw this game from two points of view.

In the first, it's a truly awkward situation. You're running into your ex girlfriend with your now boyfriend. You're nervous it'll be awkward but...(Spoiler - click to show)she barely remembers you dating? That's super awkward. And pretty funny.

From the other point of view, it's kind of a mystery. Everyone has very specific and unusual names. Is it a reference to a show? An in-joke? Some OCs?

Either way, the styling is nice, some good choices for color and font to add to the awkward feeling.

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Lance Cirone, August 7, 2023 - Reply
Hey, thanks for playing! I woke up with a fever today, so it was nice to see your comment. I explain the game a bit more in my postmortem: https://intfiction.org/t/sprinklepills-elizas-unbearable-awkward-reunion-a-post-mortem-double-feature/63394/

In essence, this is an adaptation of part of a series I've been writing for around three years. All my characters are original; Edits' name comes from a user on a site I knew, and Honey's surname was inspired by a webcomic I read. I picked "Sunflowertavia" because the full story involves her having a ridiculous first name as a plot point. I do think the ultra-condensing makes it a bit harder to follow, but I'd be glad to share some longer bits of it if you're interested.
MathBrush, August 8, 2023 - Reply
I just went and read the postmortem! Yeah that could be fun to read, you should dm me a link on the forum.
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